Let Me Out: A Story of Survival

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I could hardly breathe.

The compression was so tight.

Couldn't he see me?

Was he blind?

Or was he just disturbed?

Why was he doing this?

"I promise; I love you!" I plead with him.

"Flattery won't save you now. You lied to me."

His grip got tighter and tighter around my neck. 

I kept begging, even as the air slipped from my body.

"I do love you. Just please let me go and I'll show you."

After those words, he stopped.

I coughed. I heavily breathed in. 

He looks at me, waiting. 

I undress in front of him. I try to block the tears from streaming down my cheeks.

"I'm giving you this gift." I tell him. 

My virginity.

He smiles. A tear forms in his eyes. "I love you, Ava."

I struggle with the words as he slips off his clothes. I cry on the inside.

"I love you too."

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How's that for an introduction?

This story is going a different direction than my first one. I'll write a bit of the plot here.

Ava Monroe-Bailey is 19-years-old, a freshman in college studying to become an English teacher, is rather shy and reserved, but is always willing to lend a helping hand to whoever needs it. After losing her father to cancer when she was 16, she promised to volunteer at the local hospital to help people suffering from life threatening illnesses by entertaining them, keeping them company, and just spending time with them. 

Bradley Grueller is 25-years-old, a college drop-out working a dead-end job at a fast food restaurant, a victim of child abuse,  and is hiding a terrible secret; every woman he told he loved he's killed. He hides this secret from his adoptive family, who believe he's just having emotional problems. It's more than that; it's becoming an obsession. After visiting his brother, who's suffering from cancer, a chance encounter introduces him to Ava. He becomes obsessed with her. His obsessions leads him to the ultimate conclusion; she was the ultimate one. For this reason, Bradley decides to bear children with her; whether Ava liked it or not. 

I thought the idea sounded intriguing. It will make more sense as the story goes on. The story will be written in both Ava's point of view and Bradley's point of view though I'm not sure if they'll be in the same story. I might write a separate one for Bradley, but it will be part of the same story if that makes sense. I hope you enjoy!

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 09, 2011 ⏰

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