Critiken

[1] Flight

Bryan's POV
I was on my Bluetooth. "No, I'll be there by morning, hold your damn horses." I said in my obviously sexy British voice. I totally didn't say that because I'm egotistical. A blonde flight attendant came up to me. "Would you like me to contact the snack cart, sir?" She asked me. Twit. "No thank you ma'am. Thank you for asking..." Ugh, dumb blonde. I thought to myself. Continuing my conversation.
Emma's POV
I'm a flight attendant on flight Ann Dramada. I hate having to curl my long blonde hair every morning just to come to work for the basic. "Hey sexy...." Comments because of my tight skirt around my thighs. My uniform son sister of a pencil skirt color navy blue with a white stripe across the middle, basic little flight attendant hat, blue with white brim. And high heels of course. I heard a young males voice calling my name.
Derik's POV
I just saw the most beautiful woman in my life. Her name tag read Emma Yeller. I called her over. More like wolf whistled and called her name. I was outside the bathroom, waiting for a vacant one whilst thinking of pick up lines. Got it! I thought. "Excuse me, ma'am... I seem to have noticed something wrong with my cell..." I got this. She spoke in the most graceful voice, slightly deep, but not too deep... "What's the matter?" She asked me. I handed her my phone. "Your number isn't in my contact list." Wink.
Gracie's POV
"You're just gonna let him be like this? Men shouldn't be using cheesy pickup lines!" A man was asking for a females phone number outside of the door. "I'm complaining to the captain that their staff is being a slut instead of working!" I stomped off. I could hear the sigh of the flight attendant. "Excuse me, captain! One of your ditsy flight attendants is getting knocked up out there! Tell her to pay attention to the passengers and not her love life!" They looked back at me. "Sorry ma'am, we'll talk to her later. The plane is having difficulties..." He said to me. I started flipping out.

"What?! Fix it!" I screamed. "Ma'am, calm down. It's under control." He tapped a button on the dashboard. "Come in commander, our plane needs auto pilot to Romania. We are experiencing difficulty." He said into the mic. "Hello? Sir? Hello? Ma'am, get out of the cockpit. The plane is embracing for impact."
SeaMan's POV
"What's your name kid?" I asked a young lad next to me. "I'm Jimmy!" He said in a prepubescent voice. "Well kid, now you're captain Manny!" I put my navy seals hat on his head. He yipped in happiness. The flight attendant came around. "Attention all passengers, the plane is experiencing difficulties and the captain needs you in the back of the plane slowly and quietly. Thank you." My time to shine, my time to save this child who was traveling alone...
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