Rotting hell chapter One- The beginning

Okay so this is a new idea that popped into my head while I was unfairly grounded but anyway if you like it tell me by voting or msg me . criticism is highly appreciated I wanna know if its good or not . so enjoy the read (: 

This is the story of Flou Anderson a typical 18 year old finishing high school until she moves from sunny California to tropical Florida. Where she meets new friends who are suppose to be ordinary but are far from it .

chapter one - The beginning 

As I was boarding the plane I wavede my last goodbye to my bestfriends Laura, Dora, && Max . I took my seat && plugged in my ipod to distract myself from the 2 or so hour flight to my new home in Florida. My parents had gotten a new job working for some big ass company so we're moving. I was born && raised in Santa Cruz so moving for me is a big deal. Im going to be leaving my home && my friends, everything that I grew up with .

~3 hours later~

As Im decending the plane I noticed my parents behind me getting their handbags that are allowed on the plane. Their getting off the plane while im searching for my bags; when I find them I head back towards my parenst && sit && wait for the person who's supposed to pick us up. Not long after we noticed I boy with bleach blond hair && sky blue eyes holding up a sign saying "Andersons' " 

As we reach him he sits the sign down  && greets us with " So how was your flight ? " 

To which my father replied with " it was pleasent'' as he smiled at the boy.

'' Well my names Seth Waters && I will be your guide." he chimes.

" Pleasure to meet you Seth my name is Greg && these are my wife && daughter, Jasmine && Flou.'' my father introduced us. 

My mother nodded with a smile && Seth Looked over at me && I smiled in which he returned.

''Pleasures all mine sir'' Seth said before he lead us to the limo.

The ride to the Beaux Arts Miami Hotel was silent, although I took the time to take the beauty of Florida in. Hmm , I might actually get use to it here.

'' Well Ladies && gentelman welcome to Miami." Seth announced excitedly.

I laughed at his enthusiasm && shake my head. When we get our keycards we make it to our room before I crash out on the comfy bed. 

~The next day~ 

As im having a peaceful dream I am rudely awaken by the constant knocking on my door. I groan && get to my feet && head for the door.

When I manage to open it in my sleep state standing outside the door is I very excited Seth. Who's wearing dark jeans && a white t-shirt.

''Seth ?'' I asked tilting my head to the side confused. 

'' The one && only'' he beamed.

I laughed && said '' I see that but I dont mean to be rude but why are you here ? ''

'' Well your dad asked me to show you the way around town so you dont get lost for when you start school.'' he responded with a smile.

'' Oh well okay let me get dressed'' Ii said as I head back to my room " you can come in if you want ?'' I suggested.

He hesitated for a second but then stepped in && smiled.

''Thanks''

" No problem" I said.