Marks pov
I followed her to Carrie's house. Hilaena walked to the kitchen and I trapped her.
"Before you says anything.." I say and she jumps around
"Holy Jesus you scared me." She says.
"I'm sorry. Actually bi got in there two minutes before you did and I was talking to Bryce so I didn't even know they were kissing. They only kissed for like two seconds before you walked in and fill you ripped her hair out. Which by the way was really funny." I feel the tears coming. "I followed you here to tell you. Hilaena Marie Bell, I love you. They say the sky's the limit but my love for you reaches th e milky way and beyond." I just poured my heart out for her and she Bette put it back in for me.
"Mark, I love you to. But you have to make this right with Carrie and Jacob first. I don't know why I broke up with you back at school. But I didn't mean to. Jacobs home over here you need to talk to him get there back together. There ment to be. And it's just heart breaking to see her like that. And him they way he is. It's just gross. Please fix it." She says
"I'll try. I'll be back though. Talking to Jacob first." I say running out the door.
Jacobs pov
My heart its gone. I don't feel it in my chest anymore. I'm watching Carrie sleep on that new kids chest. She looks so happy. Happier than she ever was with me. I opened my window and saw Hilaena.
J: unlocked carried window please.
H: hello umm. Who are u again? Oh ya. The guy who broke her heart haha no.
J: come on. Get that guy out. I'm gonna talk to her.
H: there's someone there who wants to talk to you.
I turn around and see Mark standing there
"I just talked to Hilaena. She forgave me. But dude you need to talk to Carrie. Why did you kiss that girl?" Mark asks me.
"I honestly don't know. I didn't feel or mean anything to me. She was just holding onto me. Her lips were locked and every time I tryed to pull away she just came at me harder. Not letting me breath or anything." A tear starts rolling down my cheek till it lands on a pad of paper.
The big day
Pick Carrie up at 5
Go karts at 5:30
Dinner at 6:15
Movie at 7
They were the plans for today. Oh my gosh I'm suck a bad boyfriend. I run out of my house. I could barly see. They tears were in my way. Then I bumped into someone.
The girl that ruined my relationship.
"I don't need or want to talk to you. I don't even know your name. I didn't want to kiss you. You ruined my life and you deserved that beating you got from Hilaena this morning." She started crying and ran off. Serves her, she ruined my life. I helped my self into Carrie house. As that I knew where they keep the key outside. That kid was sitting on the couch and tryed to stop me.
"Let me go. You will never replace that. Your just a replacement for me till I make this right." I punched him in the face and he fell to the ground. She wasn't in the kitchen. No where downstairs. I ran up to her room and there she was. Brushing her hair counting "1,2,3,4,5,6,7. What? Jacob what are you doing? I don't want to see you!" I turned her chair around and grabbed her hands. Holding her down.
"I know I don't want to do this, but I need to talk to you." She struggles in my arms. "Carrie Elizabeth Carper. I love you to the moon and back. There's nothing that will change that. A stupid kiss with another girl was dumb. I didn't feel anything. That spark that I always have with you, I didn't have that with her. If I didn't love you would I have waited the month you were gone for you? Would I have been there by your side when you woke up? Would I have been the reason your still here? I know we have our bad times. But there's nothing or no one who will change the love I have for you." I say. She's in tears. I hug her. She cryed into my arms. "And that has been said, will you still come with me tonight?" I ask please don't say no. I love this girl in my arms. Jesus please bring her back to me. I pray.
"Jacob, yes. Yes I will go with you. I love you. There no limit to my love for you. It's so hard to picture me with out you. It's so hard to see you with a nother girl." I start crying into the crease of her neck. I kissed her nose as she leaned up.
"Ok, if we're going tonight I need to get ready. I've been crying for hours and I have bags under my eyes."
"Ya. But you still look cute. I'll be here at 6 to pick you up." I say closing her cretan's. "Keep these closed till I knock on your door." I says. If she looks out before I knock it will ruin my plan.
"Carrie, Jacobs in the house and he wants to talk to you. But he punched me lock the door." Matt says walking in the door covering his eye. Carrie laughing.
"Matt I think you should go. And yes Jacobs here and it's ok" Carrie says laughing.
"I'll see you at six." I kissed her goodbye and walked out shouting the door behind me. I had to get ready myself. I walk home and start getting ready for my date with my girlfriend who I almsot lost today.Heyy Long chapter again. Sorry. Guys for holding you off. Last chapter was anyone in tears? I know I was. It's my book. im gonna update the next book later. Love you cuties

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Another Cinderella Story
FanfictionWhen 12 year old Carrie Carper moves from her home I'm Kentucky to Virginia her life is over driver with new school, new friends but most of all new home. she lives next to the one and only Jacob. there moms are best friends and when Jacob lays his...