Random story ideas that I have and just thought of

Story idea 1#

A small child runs quickly and quietly through the fog that was spread out through the small town, trying to hide from the Dark Creatures that were coming after her. She quickly spots a small ally that had a garbage can that she knew that she could hide under until they passed by her. After getting underneath there the small girl then waited and waited till the creatures passed by, but by the time they passed by with out noticing the small child shaking in the cold, she had already fallen alseep.

Tell tell me what you think?
Should I continue or no??