Chapter 4

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Mom=M Luis=L
M:Luis why are here!?
L:Because your beautiful daughter told me that you were a big fan and I wanted to meet you.
M: OMG I can't believe you are here at my house!!!!
L:Well here I am.
M:Come let's go inside my house.

I think Luis was kind of annoyed with my mom because she kept on yelling and I could tell by looking at his face.
I told Luis to follow me to my room and told my mom where I was going.
Luis=L Natalie=N
L: You have such a big house!
N: Well my parents are doctors so...
L: I'm gonna sit on your bed
N: ok I'll sit down next to you
L: hey Natalie I have to tell you something
N: yea
L: do you want to go out with me?
N:..............
L: you don't have to I mean we barely met each other, sorry for asking.
N: yes, I'll go out with you
L: Really?
N:yea why not, your the most perfect guy I've ever met.
L: Your the most perfect woman I've met in my entire life, I feel like I've known you forever with those 3 hours that we talked

I had a radio in my room and Luis turned it on. Nada mas por eso was on. He asked me if I wanted to dance I took off my heels and said ok. We danced to several songs and got tired. We fell into bed and fell asleep next to each other.

A few hours later
I woke up and didn't see Luis. I looked for him and my mom told me he left because he had to record a song. I ran back upstairs to my room and saw that in my nightstand there was a note.
"Goodmorning princess. I'm picking you up at 6 so we can do something special so be ready by then call me when you are not busy.
Love, Luis 373****

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