Bills best torture-a gravity falls fanfiction

Dipper

-so this is my very first fan-fiction ever so any feed back would be cool. :)

                       Bill chuckled as the twins scurried to the far corner of their cage.Huddling close together bill gave them a once over. They were pale,thin,week,bruised and battered,and absolutely terrified.

                  "good morning my pets" he said with a sinister grin. Bill smiled at the twins shocked and horrified faces.

                   Dipper was the first one to speak. He said in a weak and scared voice,"Bill what have you done to your body".

                  As scared as dipper was he could not hide his curious nature.  He let go of his shaking sister and slowly and weakly crawled to the front of the cage. He pressed his face up to the bars to get an closer examination of bills new body. Bill was tall dipper would guess about six feet. He had pure alabaster skin except for the freckles on his nose and cheeks.his hair was long and bright yellow at the bangs but dark black and short everywhere else. One of his eyes was bright yellow and slit like a cat the other eye had a symbol of his old form on it. His teeth were bright white and sharp like razors. He wore a slightly dull yellow shit with a black vest  on top.  Also black trousers and slightly healed black shoes with a yellow tips.

                   Bill leaned in and said in hushed voice "are you enjoying the show pine tree" dipper scurried back to his sister as bill neared the cage."do you like my new form"he sneered. "I made it specifically for what i had in mind for today".

                       The twins new what bill meant they looked up at him and said with pleading eyes"please be gentle with us".

                 mabel started crying. Dipper pulled his sister in tighter as she sobbed soaking the rags he wore. dipper looked up a bill with a stone cold expression. The only thing on his face that gave away any sign of fear where his eyes.

                 "please not today bill" dipper said in a wavering voice,"were not ready yet".

                                      bill looked at the dipper and said in a soothing voice"pine tree listen i now your scared but your both of age, its time".

                    Mabel shook even more curling into an even tighter ball as if that would save her from the what was coming."shooting star" bill said with fake sincerity "i'll be gentle".

                    Dipper backed away further he new that bill  only ever spoke like that when he was about to really hurt them. He tried to put the twins in a false sense of safety. He opened cage door and went in he grabbed dipper by the hair and dragged him out."no, please bill stop don't do this"he begged.

                           Mabel grasped at her brother in an feeble attempt to drag him back. "dipper , no" she sobbed as she lost her grip. she drew her knees up to her chest trying to rock her self into a false sense of hope.

       "calm down pine tree just relax" bill said as he tried to still the squirming boy.

              Bill dragged dipper out of the room were the twins cage was.he went down a hall way and into a different room.dipper kicked and screamed trying to get away from the demon. bill grabbed dippers throat and squeezed.not enough to kill the boy but enough to silence him.

              Bill pulled dipper up so he was forced to go on his toes,he whispered menacingly " Pine tree quiet down or mabel will go first understand".

             Dipper nodded terrified  there was no denying it now this was happening today and there was nothing he could do to stop it.

                              "strip and get on the bed on all fours bill commanded. dipper did as he was told and crawled onto the large four poster bed in the center of the room.he felt the bed sag as bill got on the bed behind him.

                       Dipper was shacking like a tree in a storm, he felt bills body against his. It  felt warm and oddly comforting but dipper new better. Bill was cold and wanted to inflict pain and fear in the twins.

                    Bill flipped dipper onto his back, leaning in close supporting his weight on one arm he slowly trialed the other one one up dippers stomach and chest.

He leaned in  even further whispering into dippers ear "calm down pine tree i'm really not going to hurt you." Bill looked at dipper with a serious soft gaze and said,  ". I promise i'll be gentle but i need to do this." He said as sincerely as possible.

                        Dipper took a deep breath trying to calm himself he managed to stop shaking some

"I t..trust you" dipper stammered. Even though he new better,even though bill had hurt them so many times before dipper believed him.

                    Bill was taken a back.he could not believe that pine tree had just said that. He leaned in again this time planting a soft kiss on his lips. He trialed kissed down dippers neck and chest licking, sucking, and blowing on his nipples. Dipper moaned and shuddered  in response to the gentle stimulus.

                Bill held three fingers to dippers mouth "get them wet"he commanded.

Dipper obey sucking and licking bills fingers till they were soaked. Bill slowly eased a finger in moving it slowly. dipper tensed up at the intrusion.

"relax pine tree if you tense up like that it'll hut more". Bill said sucking on dippers nipples.

Dipper took another breath trying to relax him self.  Bill angled his finger hitting dippers sweet spot causing the boy to throw his head back at the new sensation. Bill slipped in another finger running over dippers sweet spot exiting loud moans from the boy. He added the third finger and stretched causing dipper to wince.

                     "Breath pine tree this will hurt but it'll feel good after a while". Bill pushed him self into dippers tight hole slowly. Dipper let out a pained groan grasping at the sheets. Bill stilled allowing dipper the time to get used to the feeling. Then he started thrusting at a slow and steady pace.

         "B...bill p...please,this hurts" dipper pleaded grasping at the sheets tighter. His breathing was choppy and his face was flushed and twisted into a grimace of pain. felt like he was about to pass out from all the pain.

                            "Breath pine tree the pain will fade"bill said. He angled his hips up hitting dippers sweet spot causing the boy to moan in pleasure.

                         "Please do that again" begged dipper. His face softened from one of pain to one of pleasure, lust, and need. Bill picked up the pace hitting dippers sweet spot over and over again enticing louder and louder moans from the boy. Dipper had completely forgotten about the pain.In fact at this point he started to enjoy the stretching and burning sensation's.

              "uh pine tree your so tight, i'm about to cum" bill grunted. He gave a few more quick thrust's  before releasing into the dipper's hot tight body.

                    Dipper came soon after bill did his body arching, reveling in the new and pleasurable sensations. When he finally came down from his orgasm he looked up at bill, and betraying his own sense of reason he said "I love you".

                    Bill was surprised he kissed dippers forehead whispering "I love you too"

                                                                               the end

sorry that was so long