Moon

Moon chapter 4

I was so lucky holding Moon her hand when we were walking to the park. But the happy feeling quickly disappeared. We heard a wierd noise, it litterly freaked me out. The more we heard the noise, the louder and creepyer it got.
Everyone was scared including me. I told Moon it was okay, that she didn't had to be scared I was hoping I sounded more confident than I was actually.
Suddenly a weird sound came, it was like a laught. Moon stiffened. Like she knew the laugh. "Moon, what's wrong?" I asked her, I knew my voice was shaking. Moon looked me in the eyes, she was really scared.
" I know that laugh." she said. Mid-sentence her voice hit over. "That is the laugh I heard at the night of the accident..." when she said that she looked in everyones eyes. We knew we needed to go. We all took a step back except Moon.
"Moon, come here!" Cassandra shouted at her, the laugh got louder and closer, but Moon didn't move.
Everyone run the patk out.
I walked toward her and grapped arm. "Moon we need to go!" I said, she turned around, and we started running after the others. "I'm sorry" Moon said "I was scared and didn't know what to do." we were still running.
we were far behind the others.
"I know, I am scared too." I admitted.
Something pulled us back. I fell on the ground, I heard Moon falling next to me.
"You had to be dead." said a man clothed in black. He was talking to Moon.
I didn't know what to do. What could I do?
I remeberd what my grandmother always said before she died. Sometimes you don't have to think and just do it.
So I didn't think. I grapped Moon her arm again, stood up and run.
Moon ran stumbling after me because I pulled her up unexpectedly. I heard footsteps behind me and they were not from Moon.
The man clothed in black was following us, I didn't know where I was, I have never been in this part of the park, I couldn't see the others anymore. But I didn't stop running.
"James!" Moon said "We will not make it! He is too close!"
Moon sounded exhausted.
But I,didn't stop running. I coudn't loose her. Since she was in my lige, she was my everything, my life.
" I am not stopping Moon." I told her " I can't loose you."
The man laughed like he didn't believe I could save Moon.
The man really was to close. Something pulled me back and I wasn't holding Moon her hand anymore. I turned with a jerk. I saw the grapped Moon her troaht.
The only thing I could do was screaming...

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Is my story a little spooky?