Reverse Harem fic. RECOMMENDATION

[ Random ] Gold. GOOLLLLD

Title : Party Party

Author : SilverPichuStories

Web : wattpad (First time!!!l

Desc : ^ BADASS GIRL GOT HAREM WHOOOOOOO BEST BEST BEST RANDOM REVERSE EVER !

Comment :

Firstly,

PLOT IS GOOD

Unusual, exciting, mysterious, and make reader want to know more.

This is literally, every fantasy lover dream. Its a really good plot, but still can be better. I think the author can increase her creativity and make it to another whole new world that the reader will just read in awe.

An I think she can organize the plot way more.

MAIN IS 1000 SCORE

Unusual, bubbly, cute, really really fun, and funny.

She is like every rev-har lover's dream. Someone who you want to know more and just want to read more.

And the system and tech in the story are good but can be better. Describe the place in more detail, make it when the reader read. They just imagine with awe.

Harem : Fluff is still little since little chapter. But so far its sooooo SASTIFYING. OMG I JUST SQUEAAAAL.

And The way the men fell is actually pretty logical! Hope the author will add more men in the harem.

If u dont mind reading a lots of oc, read this. Im sure its worth it. ITS WORTH IT

And what I particularly like is how she inserted the males one by one, letting the previous male bonds before adding another. And she didnt add 7 males in 1 chapter. She adds 1 per 3-4 chaps. Which make it brilliant, and easier to remember. And the boys didnt immediately fall, they nond first.

I wish she add the chappies portion. I mean, its sastifying. But not enough! I wish it was 1000-2000. But I understand she has life out there.

And ahe update fast! I love her! >~<)/
RATE : 9.5 PLACES AND PLOT CAN BE BETTER. NEED MORE UPDATES AND FLUFF. HAREM CAN STILL BE ADD

THIS IS TRASURE. PLS GO AND READ AND COMMENT AND LIKE IT.

I DUNNO WHY SHE ONLY HAVE LIKE 400 READER THIS IS GOLD MAN. GOOOLD

#TOOEXCITEDTOTYPE

#edittedadayafteriwrote,wheniwascalmer.