HEY GUYS!! This is my first peice of writing on wattpad and i'd really like to know how this excerpt from a story i'm writing is. I mean is it okay or is this too corny or too emotional... do i need to change anythhing to make you guys love it!! I'd really like to know.... Till then toodalooze my stallions. Ride off into the sunset with your magical unicorns and fairy godmothers.
Priya _____________________________________________________________________________
18.7.15
There was this time, when I was a small girl and only wished for a piece of candy or a fine china doll, but now that has changed. As I grew physically, so did my mind, which yearned for expensive and society approved gadgets. I was no longer acquiescent and lived just to defy my parents. When my parents would ask me to elucidate my behaviour, I always replied by either locking myself up in my room, or running away to my friends’ houses. Over time, my parents’ trust in me lowered until one day, when they finally couldn’t take it anymore. They soon proceeded in signing me up for a military school, and by then I had no one to blame but myself. I didn’t want to be so impossible to deal with, but all I wanted to do was fit in with society and be well known. So, what if I wanted to be accepted? Be loved? Be popular? It was a type of lifestyle that I wanted to pursue and be part of. Soon, I was shipped off to military school and although I had trouble fitting in, I soon learned that I wasn’t a follower but a true leader. I took on the role of a sergeant and led my troops to victory multiple times. I truly defied society, by being my own person and being a person who someone could trust deeply. I felt that I had to make up for betraying my parents, and losing their trust in me. As of now, I am writing this journal entry sitting on a wooden box, and wearing tattered army clothing, but I know that this is what I was born to do. I was born to defend my country and I will continue to do so until the day I die. There are moments when my troops and I are forlorn, defeated, and battered, but I know that we have to keep pushing to reach the better moments. I haven’t seen my parents since the year of 2001 and I may never see them again, but hopefully this letter will reach them and brighten up their day. Mom and Dad, just remember that although I have never been a great daughter and you may have lost all faith in me, I just want you to know that I have never stopped loving you and I never will.
With Love,
Your daughter...
