This is my first story so help me with my mistakes.
Opening my eyes in a back of a car, listening to the silence brought upon my fellow Friends. Looking outside to the frozen dark woods as snow falls lightly, thinking to myself was I just dreaming about being a young adult? I realised we were going pretty fast, trees zooming by. Zoning back into reality I hear Screaming and arguing. I look down to see blood on my hands. I suddenly hear "Go faster, they're gaining on us!" Yells Breanna. I look back to see these pure black shapes on all fours running after us with glowing red eyes. I scream out "what the fuck?!" As Mike to my left fumbles to load his Glock. Tim the driver is screaming at Mike "Hurry the fuck up man!" Mike finally loads his Glock ready to roll down the window as Breanna is holding both sides of her head obviously scared out of her mind. Within a second I hear tires screeching as Tim tries to take control of the wheel. We swerve off the road hitting a hill made out of snow the snow plowers made during the afternoon. We flip rolling over and over again into a ditch, the last thing I see are the demonic black figures but much closely. It's pure white razor sharp teeth inching closer to me. It's head had a gashing hole in the front and it was clicking something to get waves of imagery. My eyes losing sight to blackness as it opens its mouth unhinging it.
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