YOU as an author.. you must always think about what readers think...
What they think about your story
Your Characters
Prologue
The Story's Plot ....
As a reader myself, i don't like characters (especially boy characters) to be exaggerated that much
like this
ayaw niya magising
"CARL!!!"
"hmmm"
tsk ganun pala ah?
kumuha ako ng timba ng tubig at ..
"AY PALAKA!"
really? ganun -___- nakakawalang ganang basahin.
make it more decent ...gawin mo yung what boys really think.
i have MY BROTHER and MY DAD, di namana ganun reaction nila
pag nagugulat ah?
pero please,just please dont exaggerate too much.
~aiskreem
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Tips and Advices for Readers and Writers
Humorokay, i know im not that famous or anything but.. as a reader. we too need some good stories once in a while. this is not made to criticize something but to point out what me, as a reader think about a writer who will write a story. so, i just waant...
