wag ang masyadong cliche
GAAHD -__-
ilang beses na ako nagbabasa ng mga stories na masyadong gasgas na ang plot.
YES. gasgas -__-
halimbawa.. may nabungguan si girl na gwapong boy tapos naging magkaaway sila and then sila nagkatuluyan the end..
which is VERRRRRRRRRy VERRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY Predictable!
we'll pwede naman ganun pero how about yung may twist? like, make it unpredictable. be more imaginative. think the impossible. lawakan mo imagination mo dagdagan mo ng surprise.
for example:
"Aray!"
howmaygulay ang gwapo niya
makalaglag panga sa kagwapuhan..
"Tss.di kasi tinitingnan ang daan."
"Aba mister huh, dikonamanalamnanandyankaatniisangsorrymanlangdiMomagawaabadipwedeyanLESSHEKA--mmph"
O___O
nilagyan niya ako ng...
lipstick.
"First of all ate. MISS hindi MISTER malalate na ako sa pageant at paharang harang ka diyan? *flips Imaginary hair *
Nakakastress! gosh. hmmp *walkout*"
diba unexpected? hahaha anyway.
please don't be mad but. ngayon konti nalang talaga kooooooonti nalang ang naiiwan na mga magandang story.
eto kasi palagi eh.
gigising,Inanarate ang nangyari kahit tulog pa,magpapakilala,malalate at papasok sa school.
sa tuwing ganyan nababasa ko. wala. close tab. sorry for being mean but.
seriously we want something new.
but anyway,highway. maybe one of you is the next Denny, who knows?
well, just keep on writing and Inspire everybody
~aiskreem
BINABASA MO ANG
Tips and Advices for Readers and Writers
Humorokay, i know im not that famous or anything but.. as a reader. we too need some good stories once in a while. this is not made to criticize something but to point out what me, as a reader think about a writer who will write a story. so, i just waant...