First Chapter, tell me if it is good or not.Percy's POV
It was a cool summer day at Camp Half Blood, two months prior to the Giant War, and I was stuck in school like a regular mortal. You think saving the whole world would get a better reward, but no I have to go to stupid school.
Camp also made me more "hotter" you can say, girls chase all over me and I say I have a girlfriend, but they don't listen.
"EEEEEKKKKK!!!! HE'S RIGHT OVER THERE!!!! HOW DO I LOOK!!!"
Ugh! The girls are coming, dam it! Heh Heh DAM IT. Right before the girls arrive, the homeroom bell rang, thank god.....s. My school average is a C, don't blame me I have ADHD and dyslexia. I only have a A+ in Gym, and in Greek Mythology I have a A++. Weird right?!! As soon as I enter homeroom, I heard someone speak on the intercom.
"Will Percy Jackson please report to the main office!!!" the intercom said.
All eyes were on me now and the teacher, Mr.Blofis, my stepdad, told me to go. I was walking to the main office wondering what I have done wrong, was it because I rejected those girls, or punching a bully in the face. Or maybe it was....
"You may come in now, Perseus Jackson."
My hand gripped my pen/sword Riptide because only monsters use my full name. When I realized it was the secretary, Mrs. Kelli, I put the pen back. Her last name isn't really Kelli, it's actually a name I don't want to say, so I just call her Mrs. Kelli (her last name is really Castellan *wink,wink*) It is ironic that her first name is Kelli and her last name is Castellan, that it is a bit creepy. She also only looks like shes my age, maybe 18 or so. But I shrugged it off. Soon, I finally decided to walk in and I find myself alone, with Mrs. Kelli.
"What am I doing here?" I said nervously.
"Oh, why I have come to KILL you Perseus Jackson"
She then transformed to a hideous beast.
"Emposa!!! Wait a second!"
"Yes, took you long enough, I am Kelli, the emposa. I've been here waiting for two months for the right time to strike."
I quickly pulled out my sword and slashed at her, but a big furry arm pulled me back. I was soon knocked out, by a big ax and before I fell unconscious, I smelled bull.
Uh Oh!
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That was my first chapter, how was it?
Okay, I'm think about doing a question game of sort, it will be about Percy Jackson or my story.
Question of the Chapter: Who was that beast in the end of the chapter?
Who said it first gets a shout-out in the next chapter, and gets to name a O.C. I will personally send you a message and gather the info needed. If you see a character you never saw before, you can assume its a O.C. No gods, but Big Three children are allowed, though I'll have a maximum amount. It can be other demigods, satyrs, hunters, amazons, or even monsters. Greek or Roman you decide.
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