Thunder

intruder alert

I ran forward in a stupid attempt to do some thing, i had never seen any thing like this in my life.ever. what ever this thing was could probably kill me -the size of it was monstrous but i didn't care i wasn't scared- no not at all i was positive that if i could hold this thing off then landon could surely help me or what I would rather he do take the kids and run. I was ready to collide with the thing  but missed by hairs I directed my land towards a tree ,teetering lightly crouched on the limb i hissed loudly the thing or dog or wolf was probably the best terminology- stopped in mid flight growling back at the same second he turned his head at the noise but it was too late and landon had already smashed into his side the bones I heard crunch had to have had some effect on him it did, but not for long he limped around in circles growling the entire time I watched tentatively at this this creature thing before slowly jumping down from the tree I went to stand by landon who was crouched forward like he was observing the thing but also as though ready to spring at any sign of movement I walked past him before he could stop me up in front of the boyish dog he wasn't so.......monstrous like I imagined nothing too weird or complicated about this thing just a gi-freaking-normus bear type thing with boyish features sort of. I sighed touching his shoulder and he didn't complain I could feel a few broken joints but that's not all i could feel  i felt his muscles moving popping into place and i nearly gagged flinching and placing my hand at my side I could still hear the crunch but when it stopped the boy lifted up once on his hind legs shook once and change back to himself- his naked self landon snarled pushing me behind him ''put some clothes on'' he growled the boy smirked pulling on briefs and shorts that i didn't see at his feet ''who are you'' landon hes already started integrating him ''brent and you are...'' he drawled on ''the owner of this property'' he spat ''yeah well I just came to talk to her'' he said smug pointing at me ''I think not'' landon retorted ''i think so'' I said sliding past him speaking for my self at this point lane and natalie were flanking us and dake and jake were farther back with ana. ''hi'' the boy smiled cheekily aww he was cute ''hi sweetie'' i chirped back ''well I guess I'm here to warn you'' warn me? ''of what'' ''nick Nathanial a man like my kind he coming here for you and your family some thing that you've recently acquired is some thing valuable that he believes should only be possessed by some one with the right knowledge'' uhhhh ''okay whats that some thing'' he ran his tongue over his teeth before pointing behind us ''her'' we all turned to 'her' our recently acquired possession. ana ''well go tell him he cant have her'' i said not smiling who ever this was obviously had some screws lose- ana had a family before us a normal family and is human a normal human and no one was taking her ever. ''haha as if it where that easy he's got a whole fucking team standing behind him he could take you out with out touching you nick is a very very powerful man and he wants her so he gets her and like i said he's got hundreds on his side'' ''well we've got six and unless you want to join the club you can leave'' I hissed through my teeth so many questions who was he, why did he want ana, how did he know ana, who is brent, why has he followed me, whats happening. ''well actually I am here to help you -me and my pack'' ''why? i mean thank you but id rather you not get involved and- your pack?'' ''well truth is nicks my uncle I got tired of his ways and left and took my pack with me I heard what he was planning and decided to play hero'' he smirked ''your the devils nephew'' ''yes its a tragedy'' I laughed I already loved this guy though I was scared stiff, could we take them, was this guy serious ,if so once again could we take them ''and your just going to help us'' landon said butting ''well why not'' brent said leaning back on a tree ''that's what I said right'' ''thank you so much I would never ask you to do any thing like this'' ''no problem'' he said looking down ''umm who is apart of your pack'' he pushed  himself off the tree and barked some thing in a different language. french? Spanish probably? out of the woods emerged fifteen what looked like huge wolfs just like the one brent was he flowed more fluid language and they continued to move forward all dark and rugged different hues alot of reds and brown brent looked like he was the only blonde they halted and sat on their haunches muzzles pulled back staring at us and we looked back all seven of us I was now holding ana with landon by my side and the kids on either side of us ,he yelled again a command -well he did say that they were his pack but as in they belonged to him or as in he was the leader ...I'll go with answer B. after he spoke the unfamiliar language they ran back into the woods and as big as they where I could barely feel the ground vibrate in the next second they where back most dressed in shorts only girls had on shirts and some where still pulling on clothes. I covered ana's eyes. when they all had their clothes on i past ana to landon and moved forward to stand next to brent our backs to my family and facing his. i heard landon groan from behind me while brent put his arm over my shoulder since he was also taller than me and probably pushing being taller than landon dake and lane he leaned down to whisper in my ear pointing at each of the people. ''jesse'' a dark red head boy ''miley'' a brunette boy ''jaun'' a freckled face brunette boy ''margarito'' a muscular black haired boy ''toby'' a bright red haired boy ''drew'' a dark brunette boy ''carr, dawson, pauly, mack, quincy, jamie, and chris-damion'' all very dark deep Burgundy red haired tall rangy boys and at the end where two girls a pale brunette and a dirty orange they were both very pretty in a foreign way the dirty orange haired one walked forward to greet me she smiled a bitter smile a very very bitter smile ''um hi im noni'' i smiled back and shook her hand ''im nicolette brents girlfriend'' she spoke grimly while alternating glares between me brent and his arm ''oh that's grate'' i smiled again ''hm maybe'' she shrugged ''so you and your friend are going to help us with what ever is coming'' i asked suspiciously it seemed as though she already hated me and she was supposed to help us- i think not. ''well yes i guess you could say that im just with him for the long run'' she said boredly giving a pointed look at brent and he looked back annoyed and amused at the same time he licked his lips and smiled freely ''well these are they and were here to help you''he said they last part with a deep voice and his chest out like a classic super hero and that got a crack out of me but i guess it was only me but he didn't seem to care he smiled with me ''would you like to come inside for coffee'' how cliche and classy at the same time ''yeah thanks but i don't drink coffee'' three hours later we had discussed every thing now brent was living with us and had some how came up with a reason the his girl friend couldn't now it had been discussed that we where out for blood to kill nick nathaniel another bonus may i remind you was that his pack would also help watch heather the new -whether she liked it or not- proud mother of my baby its been  only a few days but weve still been keeping tabs like the mafia. we where to train with brent for him to show us how his kind could be killed and also their way of life once all this was over ot was agreed that brent and his pack would leave and every thing would go back to normal except for the reason that nick natanial wanted ana that would never change and neither would she.

mweee heee heee heeeeeee! is it suspensful or not??? im kinda actually wondering if the name for the story is good i cant seem to pin point it like a real goo name that describes the story can i please get some suggestions from any one :( well until next time !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!