The Unseen

Prologue

The evil look on those castles clearly indicated that they were build by nefarious,depraved and vicious people.when I stepped my right foot into the palace I felt a shudder of fear which made my heart to come into my mouth.it felt as if fear was running in every vein and artery of my holy body. My heart was palpitating .life just looked as if it was going to come to a melancholy end which would make me pay for all what I have done .my guilty feelings were contradicting with my fear feelings.life seemed hopeless.it felt as if I myself was trying to get in to the region of darkness .....

How was this chapter?Please don't judge ,it's my first ever book so I hope u guys can understand.....
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