Broken and Bruised (Riley McDonough fanfiction)

Concert Day

*Day of the concert*

I was more than excited. I didn't think I was ever able to actually go to one of their concerts. They're amazing live, so I've seen from YouTube videos. I seriously love them so much, and that will never change.

I took a nice relaxing shower and picked out a ombre purple and white tank top with a white lace bandeau and ripped up jean shorts and my galaxy printed Vans. I grabbed my Before You Exit wristbands. I straightened my long, vibrant red hair and put on some eyeshadow, eyeliner, mascara, and tinted chapstick. I didn't want to go heavy with my make up, but I wanted it to look some-what decent.

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I looked at myself in the mirror, you could tell how

broken I was. It was obvious. You could tell how insecure I am. The girls that are going to be at the concert are going to judge me. They're going to make fun of me and I know it. I always get made fun of.

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 I finally got to the concert. There were a LOT of other girls there. I kinda felt at home because all the girls here shared the same interest as me. Once I realized how beautiful all these girls were, my self esteem lowered even more. They were all gorgeous. I started getting depressed, then a thought came to me, why should I tear myself down? It's supposed to be a good day. A fun day. I shouldn't be depressed. 

 I felt someone bump into me, "oh sorry. I didn't mean to. I got pushed." I heard a light, yet polite voice behind me. I turned around to see a very small, in size and in height. She looked about 5 ft 2", but she was gorgeous, she looked about my age. She had beautiful bright blue eyes, her hair was pixie-cut blonde, she looked very self conscious. I smiled politely and said, "it's okay. What's your name?" She smiled self-consciously, "My name's Lilly Anne, but you can call me Lilly if you want." I smiled genuinely "Katelyn Rose, but call me Katelyn. Are you here for Before You Exit?" I asked. She smiled and shook her head yes, "YES! I love them. Thomas  is my favorite. Who's yours?" She said excitedly. I giggled at her excitement, "Riley." I said with a smile. "Aw, you and Riley would look so cute together. How old are you?" She asked. "Awh thank you, but it'll never happen. He wouldn't want someone like me. I'm 16, what about you?" I responded. "Don't be too hard on yourself, you're really pretty. I'm 17, I know. I'm short." 

 We exchanged numbers and before I knew it, the line started moving. I was beyond excited. Nothing could ever ruin my happiness. Today was the best day of my life. I was finally going to see my heroes and I finally made a friend. 

 The concert went by a little too quickly. But they were amazing. They played Little More You, Soldier, Settle For Less, I Like That, and End of the World. The concert was so much fun. I wasn't really close to them, but I was close enough to see their faces. Lilly Anne wasn't with me, she wanted to get closer to see Thomas better. I hope she could. I know how much she loves him, because most of the time we were talking about the band, all she talked about was Thomas. It was kinda cute. 

 My mom didn't go in with me, she said too much loud noise gives her headaches. She said that while I was at the concert, she was going to go shopping. I don't know why, she didn't need to. But by the time the concert was over, it was night time. It was almost pitch black, so I couldn't see much. I decided I should go near a light post so I could see what I was doing. I called my mom and told her that I was ready to be picked up. I told her where I was, then hung up. 

 I heard rattling behind me, in the bushes, I figured it was just a raccoon, so I shrugged it off. The rattling completely stopped for awhile. I decided I should listen to the concert again because I recorded it, I wanted to hear it again. I heard rattling again. I looked back and someone was standing right behind me. I couldn't believe who it was. My jaw dropped in surprise.

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Cliffhanger! Wooooah! Dun dun dun!!! Who do guys think it is? Leave it in the comments if you know who, or who you think it is. Wow, this chapter is FINALLY up. It's been the longest time since I updated this story. I thought that I shouldn't finish it for a while. I didn't want to. But now, I think I will. i dunno. We'll see. 

So, I have a new story out, it's called Ashely's Hope. It's some-what similar to this story, but I think it's 1,000 times better than this one. It would mean a lot if you guys read it, if you want to, then here's the link: http://www.wattpad.com/31948340-ashely%27s-hope 

I've been working really hard on the story, I'm pretty far in it, but I haven't put it all on here yet because I'm still writing it. I've been writing it for a month, maybe two. 

Anyhoo, I'm going now. I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter. If you did,  please vote and comment what you think. I love you guys, and thank you so much for reading my story. Have a good day. K, love you again. Bye!

~Katie <3