The Story Of The Soul On The Track

Walking into the open Gates of Upton train station (the closest station to his school in which he was in year11) dan climbed down the 4 flight's of station stairs in a hurry ,as he could hear a train pull up at the platform,but he couldn't be sure it was his because at least 3 different trains stopped at this station)
Just as Dan was about to step off the step on the last flight he heard a 'BEEP,BEEP,BEEP,BEEP'

"SHITTING,FUCK-BALLS I SHOULD HAVE LEFT EARLIER"he kind of
scream-whispered(loudly enough to express his anger,but not so loud that he would be getting dirty looks from people still waiting for other train's) as the doors of the early,empty train shut and and departed.
It was only 3:20(and he finished school at 3:15) so it wasn't like he was going to be late home for his 6:00 curfew.
But to be really honest Dan hated people.
Just in general he just wasn't a people person, and it showed in his social awkwardness and lack of social skills (TBH the only thing he was good at that anything to do with social activities was SOCIAL MEDIA)

*ANYWAY*

Dan decided not to get pissed off at the fact that ThE StuPId fucking tRAin hAdN't WAITED FOR HIM,
That was until the rest of the platform was being filled out with people from his school.
" great now I have to get on the train with these peasants"he thought to him self(he wouldn't dare say that aloud because he knew for sure he would get beaten up)
Dan must have been waiting at the station for at least 15minutes(but it felt longer) when all of a sudden he heard an eruption of voices exploding its way thorough Dan's incredibly loud music (MCR:Teenagers) so the screams and shouts of his fellow classmates must have been even louder."WHAT'S GOING ON"he tries to scream over the terrible noise, no luck no one could hear him as they all scurried to where the original noise came from, trying again...nothing, so he thought "WELL IF YOU CANT BEAT THEM JOIN THEM" even his thoughts were shouting it was so loud. He quickly scurried along side the mass of students but as he got closer to the edge of the platform what he was about to see next will haunt him forever...
It was...a student lying DEAD on the track's, but that not most disturbing part
What was really messed up was that the student on the track.............
Was...................
H.I.M(DAN)!!!!!!!!!!

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