Hey guys. I have this idea. I'm going to rewrite all of this. I think that the plot is getting shaky and that Jack and Elsa's relationship and meeting went to fast. I wanted a fast pace book so you guys don't get bored, but I fear that it's gotten all messy.
So I'm going to start rewriting it, but on a new book, that way it's all nice and bushy tailed. I am going to keep this version up until I have at least this many chapters if not more. I might even change more, like some of the plot of Frozen, and such.
Also, I have recently gotten into this Frozen/Tangled theory, which isn't the one we've all heard over and over. I beg you to watch the video that I saw this on, it's really interesting and makes sense and I mean ALL of the video, not two minutes and say 'This is stupid'.
And I'm thinking of putting that into this story and making that the main plot goal so that this isn't a cliché story. Please don't judge, and watch the video before reading my new version.
But I would love to hear your opinion on the rewrite, the theory, and this book in general, I LOVE comments. Thank you for reading and your support!!
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To Be loved (Jelsa) Book 1
FanfictionIt's been two years since Elsa found control for her powers. But even with Anna back in her life, she still feels lonely. But will that all change when Jack Frost shows up? Why is he in Arendelle? Read to find out.
