Chapter 1: The Crash

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This is my first fix, please don't eat me alive

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The scout ship loomed through space. It was drawing closer and closer to the planet called, "Earth". Bakuub's kind has come to the planet for thousands of years for the hunt. Some hunters would come in hunting parties, some hunt alone. This time Bakuub came alone, which could have been his worth decision in his lifetime.

Badbloods.

Lawless criminals who have no honor in sport, and just kill as the please, young, old, and sick alike. They've even killed other Yautja just for the joy.

Two scout ships and a mother ship uncloaks, surrounding the young hunter's ship, blast the ship, taking it's hull with it. Bakuub's ship enters the atmosphere, and quickly sinks into the Southern Hemisphere.

Bakuub flees the cockpit, and finds a life pod. The young Yautja is carried away from the wrecking ship, landing in the jungles of Meso-America.

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So yeah! Short ass first chapter, please give me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism... and a "Good Job" wouldn't be horrible, also, this is sometime in 1751

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