AUTHORS NOTE..
Spain was amazing,
I met some amazing people ,
did some amazing things,
eat some amazing ice cream
and just had an amazing time.
So anyway I decided to postpone the zayns girlfriend competition.
I don't want him to bring zayn into the story yet.
Thanx for reading xx
LOUIS POV
Our food finally came and we all dug in.
I ordered a burger, ally ordered pork loin, Rachel ordered the same as ally and Harry ordered tacos.
Harry really seemed to like Rachel since every time I looked at him he's looking at Rachel with a loving stare.
Ally and Rachel have really hit it off.
They've been talking all night.
Ally looks so beautiful, I just want to call her mine.
Before I even know what I'm doing I ask ally if we could talk somewhere more private.
She agrees looking confused.
It's now or never I keep telling myself.
I decide to go to the car since that's the only place where we can get full privacy.
If ally doesn't like me back which she most likely wont, I'll try my hardest to make everything not awkward and as normal as before.
We sit in the car in silence for nearly 5 minutes ,until ally asks me what I wanted to talk to her about.
" umm well, I want you to make a promise to me before we start". I say
Ally slowly nods her head and I take that it's my que to start talking again.
" promise me that what I am about to tell you won't make our friendship awkward" I say nervously.
" ehh, I promise" ally says awkwardly.
I take a deep breath before starting.
" ally I don't know how to put this but....I like you.." I start
" I like you to " ally chuckles
" no you don't understand , I really like you, like a lot." I continue.
Ally says nothing just looks at me confusingly.
" I don't know why, maybe it's the way you walked straight into my heart and stole it or maybe the way when you're confused or bored you talk to yourself even when you're in a room full of people."
" I might be because you're eyes are the most vibrant colour of blue I've ever seen."
" you're the most caring, nicest, most beautiful person I've ever meet."
" you put everyone else first, you make sure there happy before making yourself happy"
" I could name so many more stuff but I think you'd fall asleep by the time I'm done" I finally finish.
" wow " ally whispers
" that's all you're gonna say , oh my gosh I so stupid, I actually thought for a moment you might like me back, I can't believe I did this, just forget everything I just sai........
Ally cuts me off by placing her lips on mine.
I start kissing back after a few seconds.
I always imagined me and ally's first kiss to be filled with sparks and butterfly's but I was wrong ......
.......it's soo much better.....
The sparks that I thought would be there turned into fireworks ...
The butterfly's decided to spread there wings and fly....
The kiss was full of passion.
I break away after a few minutes out of breath.
"Wow" I whisper as ally rests her forehead against mine.
" that's all you're going to say" ally giggles.
We spend a couple of minutes regaining our breath.
" so does this mean you like me back" I question ally.
" take a guess" ally replies
" ummmm, you do " it comes out more of a question.
She nods before reattaching our lips.
There's the fireworks and butterfly's still as strong as before.
ALLY'S POV.
Me and Louis kissed for the second time.
I don't know I'd Louis feels it too but it feels like all my insides are having a wild party.
This time I pull away.
" let's go inside , Rachel and Harry are probably waiting on us." I say
We get out of the car and walk towards the restaurant holding hands and smiling like Cheshire cats.
I've always wondered if Cheshire cats are from Cheshire...that is if there even real...I've never seen one....I'll have to ask louis later if he's ever seen one...he'd probably think I'm crazy though....yea I'll put that thought on hold.
As we entered the restaurant there was a huge crowd of people gathered around our table.
Someone is singing ....
Wait a minute...
That's Harry ....
Me and Louis push our way through the crowd to the front.
Harry is standing on the table singing and Rachel is looking up at him adoringly.
HARRY'S POV.
This is it ....
I've never been good with relationships and romantic stuff so this is all new to me.
I stand up and climb onto the table.
" Harry what are you doing, you're going to get us kicked out of here" Rachel whisper/screamed.
" trust me " I replied
She nods looking confused.
My good mate Niall who is dating Ellen comes out of the kitchen with a guitar and starts to strum the cords to GIVE ME LOVE By ed sheeran.
No one apart from Louis knows this but I can sing....
Apparently I'm very good, says Louis.
I open my mouth and the lyrics start to flow out.
Give me love like her,
'Cause lately I've been waking up alone,
Pain splattered teardrops on my shirt,
Told you I'd let them go,
And that I'll fight my corner,
Maybe tonight I'll call ya,
After my blood turns into alcohol,
No, I just wanna hold ya.
Give a little time to me or burn this out,
We'll play hide and seek to turn this around,
All I want is the taste that your lips allow,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, give me love,
Give me love like never before,
'Cause lately I've been craving more,
And it's been a while but I still feel the same,
Maybe I should let you go,
You know I'll fight my corner,
And that tonight I'll call ya,
After my blood is drowning in alcohol,
No, I just wanna hold ya.
Give a little time to me or burn this out,
We'll play hide and seek to turn this around,
All I want is the taste that your lips allow,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
Give a little time to me or burn this out,
We'll play hide and seek to turn this around,
All I want is the taste that your lips allow,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love.
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover,
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover,
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover,
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover.
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover,
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover,
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover,
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover (love me, love me, love me).
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover (give me love),
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover (give me love),
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover (give me love, love me),
M-my my, m-my my, m-my my, give me love, lover (give me love).
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love,
My, my, my, my, oh give me love.
"Rachel Zoe hinds...... Will you be my girlfriend?" I ask
" let me think about it ......YES" Rachel screams
I jump of the table and crash my lips onto hers.
AUTHORS NOTE..
Sorry for not updating for ages...
I'm not going to make up some excuse....I was back from Spain nearly two weeks ago...
The reason I haven't updated is because I feel really unmotivated.
I don't want to sound selfish but I ever get any nice encouraging comments, sometimes I don't even get any comments ....
And nobody ever votes or anything...
I really don't mean to sound selfish but it what I feel...
Could you maybe try and get me 5 votes and 2 comments xxx
Will update soon
Thanx for reading xx
Abbiejtomlinson
