Choosing ceremony

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"Daniela Prior" Marcus called. I took a deep breath and looked at Caleb and Beatrice. "Good Luck" they whispered. I nodded and smiled at them and shakily got up. Everyone was looking at me. I got to the stage and grabbed the knife. The painful cutting of my skin hurt. Like heck. I made my hand into a fist and made the blood run down faster. I put my hand over the coals. Sssss. "DAUNTLESS"! Everyone clapped and cheered as I walked to get a bandage. I put it on my hand and walked over to Dauntless. I got pats my back and cheers.


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"Caleb Prior". Caleb stood up confidently and walked to the stage. He grabbed the knife and cut his hand and let his blood drip into............."no" I whispered."ERUDITE"! I thought he would stay with mom and dad. Everyone clapped and cheered except some of the abnigation and of course me. I sighed this was Beatrice's turn and I hoped she wouldn't leave mom and dad. "Beatrice Prior" She stood up and and walked to the stage,grab the knife and slice her hand. She put her hand between Abnigation and...... Oh come on don't leave mom and dad.

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She put her hand over dauntless and let the blood drip down. I wanted her to choose on her own and of course I was happy for her, but mom and dad has no one now. Then I put on a cocky smile. She walked over to me and sat down next to me."Just couldn't leave me eh sis"? She rolled her eyes. " No I just wanted to beat you at dauntless". I just loved the way she thought she would beat me at something."In your dreams Tris" I say smiling. She punches me and rolls her eyes.



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"Why.....is.......it.....such ....a...long..run". I said panting. Beatrice looked at me and laughed,then she looked out the door and laughed even more. "What is soooo funny Tris"? She pointed at our next obstacle." Oh come on"! I complained.

I sighed and backed out to the end of the train and ran forward jumping and landing perfectly. I was the only one who landed perfectly.ha.

We all gathered in a group and listened to the pretty cute instructor. "Who would like to jump first"? I looked around and as I was just about me Tris (of course) beat me to it. After she jumped I was already running toward the ledge. I stopped waited for a bit smiled and got on the ledge. I then did a front flip into the dark deep hole.

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