The Story Of Thornr red-Spear A Skyrim Story

This is the origin story of the soon to be greatest mage in all of Tamrial Thornr-redSpear. So let me take you to his birth, Thornr was born a half nord half dark elf his father had met his mother thirty years ago. His father a soon to be great blacksmith had just started as an apprentice to his future wife's father, it had been at least five months before he saw the most beautiful woman in his life but alas he was just a lowly apprentice and she was already arranged to marry a wealthy count from morrowind but she didn't love the count she wanted to find her real true love and spend the rest of her life with him. Back to Thornr's birth he was born on the fifth of Frostfall in his families one bedroom house. Growing up wasn't easy for Thornr he never really fit in with the other kids, when he was about twelve years old his father tried to teach him blacksmithing but thornr had no interest in being a blacksmith he wanted to be a mage just like his mother, she had thought him a few basic spells like healing and an invisibility spell so if he was in danger he could make a getaway.

He left home at the age of nineteen so he could go and see the world and train to be a great mage one day, he returned home at the age of twenty five but when he did get home he found out his mother had fallen ill with a new type of disease with no known cure thornr was distraught and vowed that he would travel across Tamiral to find a cure. He found himself in Skyrim seven years later still searching for the cure he was sure it was in Skyrim, he made his way through the blistering cold to a quiet little mining town then all of a sudden he heard the sound of men shouting and before he knew it he was surrounded by imperial solders and by the looks of it another set of solders were surrounded like him the next thing he knew was that an imperial officer had knocked him out. He awoke five days later in the back of a cart being taken to the town of Helgen where his father was born he then heard a gruff voice say "Hey you finally awake" Thornr repiled with " wh-where am I".

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So this is my first story story/in game roleplay journal which will last an entire play through feel free to give some feedback