Username: @most_bay
Title: Melody
Category: Romance
Language: English
Description:
I pledge myself to you, my love,
My life is no longer my own,
My afterlife is unknown,
If I'm fortunate, If I'm adequate,
If I'm to be in the heavens,
I'll plead for my home.
Your eyes are my home,
Your breath is my air,
Your voice is my song,
Your arms are my shrine,
Your heart is my altar,
Your smile is my prayer,
Your hand is my prize,
I ache to make you mine.
I need you in every way,
My rib is not in place.
My certain heart calls you,
My present, my future, my solace,
My first and last, my onliest love.
My other self, my life,
My queen, my wife,
'I love you ' is not enough.
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Melody Summer, a ninteen year old homeless girl with a painful past. Shy and introvert with major insecurities, accidentally irreligious. she grew out of foster care and was left without guidance to fend for herself in the concrete jungle of Manhattan. When she meets Akram Sadiq. Twenty one, Handsome, muslim, Egyptian-American, Juilliard student, her life takes an unexpected turn.
Aim: Feedback on my writing especially comments. Hopefully to improve my writing by receiving advice and constructive criticism.
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