AUTHOR’S NOTE:
Ok. We’ll be taking a break from the story.
I’ve heard some commentaries about my story from my friends in Tumblr and some here who have read and critiqued my story. I’m really thankful for them who have read and made some comments about it I appreciate it!
To be honest, I’m not that really good in narrating the part where the time transcends in the plot scene isn’t it? It has confused some of the readers (even me) but still it worked and here I am continuing it.
So ok, you’ve read until this half of the part two of the story, why don’t you drop me a line and tell me what you think.
The next time I’ll be posting it’ll be the end parts for the final part of the story.
|E X T R A| 02:
*my random plot scenes that didn’t made the cut*
à I’m having a hard time to wonder what to do wiff my main character’s father being linked to the Estraneo famiglia. Hmm, I was thinking that I have to say she is the one who will became the next boss but there’s no way since Mukuro had the powers of the Estraneo family (the possession bullet)plus maybe because of the family’s mass extinction they didn’t even have decided to whom the Estraneo boss will give the throne to. So that was something that I considered so I decided that I won’t make her part of any Mafia family even if her father had been working in the mafia since the start. Besides, it would be really mess up the whole plot and I’ll be more mixed up.
à I wanted to include the others for some view time but somehow it may make the story stray from the point of view so I just limited the appearance of other KHR characters in the story that seems appropriate to add to have a little zing.
à I also have planned that the main character would eventually give the painting to Mukuro but she would end up being blocked by M.M who told her that she and her painting are just worthless piece of junk that someone like Mukuro won’t even accept. (This scene is before the main character gets into an accident)
à Sometimes, I’ve been thinking that I should make this story end with the main character and Yamamoto together. I don’t know why but I was planning to put a love triangle scene between the main character, Mukuro and Yamamoto but in the end Yamamoto is the one the main character will be at the end.
Well that’s all for the part two everyone! I’ll be working on the final parts of the story.
Thanks for reading!!!
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