New Story Idea

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ok well here is the idea I told you I would put up in the last chapter but I also need a name for the stories so I would like if you could comment some ideas and if I can't think of any by my self so I could use some of them.

My hands slipping, eyes watering, hoping someone will see me. So many things running threw my mind with my hands slipping off the rail of the bridge. This wasn't the plain. I was only trying to sit on the edge of the bridge. Someone needs to come I cant leave my little brothers alone in this world with out anyone! UGGG! Is that a tour bus? OMG It is!

"HELP ME PLEASE!!" I scream eyes still watering and single tear streams down my face. I can feel my hands slipping more I close my eyes waiting for the impact of the wind on my body as I fall. nothing came. Instead I felt sparks in my body. Have I died yet? Is this what it feels like to be dead? I open my eyes to see the bridge surface right in front of my face, but there wasn't a cold feeling on my hands from the bars. I look up to see a living miracle. A boy with brown hair and blue eyes. He looked so familiar, but I couldn't put my finger on it. The boy that seemed to be a couple years older than me lifted me up and back onto the surface of the bridge. After a while of trying to get my balance with the boy helping me, I took a minute to take in his features. His hair was kind of shaggy and his eyes were an ocean blue. I smiled at him.

"Thanks" I said when I then heard someone running over to us. I turned around to see my best friend Bailey who had left about twenty minutes earlier to walk and get us food for on our way back to the orphanage. I turned back around to face the face that had just saved my life moments ago.

"Your welcome" he said with a look that I thought might have been worry.

"What happened" Bailey said she had a look that said that she was pissed and worried at the same time.

"I was sitting on the edge of the bridge like I was when you left but not even a minute after you were out of site I slipped and fell. I was hanging on the bars of the bridge for about fifteen minutes when I seen a bus" I said while pointing to the tour bus that the boy owned. " Then my hands started to slip and I thought I was going to die, but then he caught me" I said pointing to the boy who's name was unknown.

"Oh" she said and ran over to me and then gave me her famous Redetzke hug. The Redetzke hugs are absolutely the best hugs ever! I let a few tears fall from my eyes. Which only made her hug me tighter.

"We better go take care of the animals and take them to my grandmas so we can go back to the orphanage" I said to my best friend who nodded her head and agreed. we started to walk when the boy no name grabbed my arm spinning me back around.

"Yes"  I said

"Um did you say that you needed to get some animals to your grandmas then you have to go back to an orphanage?"  He asked with a frown on his face.

"Yes I did why" I said with a frown on my face

"How are you going to get there"  He asked

"Walking" I said

"How far is your house from here" He asked with a little bit of what I thought was worry. Na why would he be worried about us.

"Down that road" I said pointing to the road ahead. I seen a small smile when I said that but it soon disappeared.

"Where is your grandmas house from your house" Man he asked a lot of questions doesn't he. OMG LOUIS WILLIAM TOMLINSON JUST SAVED MY LIFE!

"um about thirty minutes by car" I said and that frown got even bigger.

"Then how many hours is the orphanage from there" he asked. Was he really worried about us? No he couldn't be.

"Around three hours by car" I said and I swear that frown couldn't get any bigger.

"We are going to take you" he said as he grabbed mine and Baileys hands and dragging us onto the bus. "Driver we are going to go off course to take these ladies home"

"I'll stay and tell you were to go" I said to the driver while Louis took Bailey to the back of the bus to where I'm assuming the other boys were. " Ok go striate"

"Ok now take a right but right after that you are going to need to turn into that ally right there" I said with pointing to the small little ally leading to my house. "Ok now see that house on the corner stop there"  He did exactly what I said and I got off the bus to grab the large amount of cats and dogs of mine and baileys. I put the five cats into a crate and the four dogs on leashes. I walked back out to the bus with the cats first and brought them in the back of the bus were the boys and bailey were. I then walked back inside and did the same routine, but this time I gave the leashes to bailey and walked back up to the front with the driver .

I gave him the directions to my grandma's house and when we got there I brought the animals inside and gave him the route to the orphanage. It turns out that they were going to the cities and that was were the orphanage was so I only had to give him the directions to get back on the high way. I walked to the back of the bus to hear bailey telling the boys our story.

The story about were my adopted abusive parents, little brother, and baileys parents, little brother, and little sister got hit by a semi. My little brother has been in a coma for almost a year. My youngest brother was at his step grandmas while I was at baileys with her. Everyone died but my little brother. My aunt could only take in me and my youngest brother, but I wasn't going to leave my best friend she was the only sister I had. So I went to the orphanage with her while my little brother went to live with my aunt.

I went and sat down by bailey as she finished telling the saddest story of our life.

"In a year when you guys are eighteen we will come at get you and take you back to England with us" Louis said. Little did ik that would have been the biggest lie that me and bailey have ever heard.

ok um I need story name ideas so complement what it should be called and I will use one of the ideas one of you comments if I cant come up with any! I hope you enjoyed it. Well bye love you my food!

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