Faded Memories

Part 2

It was about 20 minutes later.
The ambulance came with a stretcher. They came into our house with the stretcher, they layed her on it softly and put her in the back of the siren ringing ambulance. She was rushed to the hospital. Ronnie was calling my Aunt Pamela and telling her everything that happened. She told him that she would be heading to the hospital now, to check on her.
I looked out the living room window as the ambulance headed down the street.

It was late so, myself my brothers and Ronnie decided it might be the best if we all stayed at home. We were so tired, So we all walked back to our rooms and went to bed.

The next day, I woke up, and everyone else was already awake. Wow, I thought. I really slept in today. Yet, I still happened to be really tired. I got out of bed, but I decided I wasn't going to change and get ready for a new day. It was going to be my lazy day.

I walked into the living room in my comfortable pajamas, greeted by smiling faces.
That was quite odd to me. My family usually doesn't greet me with happiness like that. Hm. I thought. This is strange..        I moved on, not caring that weird things around me were happening. I reached into the cabinet and got myself a bowl and got some Captain Crunch cereal and poured some milk in my bowl. I grabbed a silver spoon and I sat at the kitchen table and ate it all. I was really hungry.

 I went into the living room and sat down and watched television with my family. It felt weird without my mom being here. It was like something huge was missing from our family, and it was. Our mom and Ronnie's partner was missing. It just felt so odd.

At around 8 pm, I decided to call the hospital to check up on my mother. Today, had been a long and tiring day. Ronnie gave me the number and helped me dial it in and all that. After that, he left the room and headed straight for bed.

I had finally got a hold of my mom but  Ronnie had already fallen to sleep. A few minutes later I could hear Ronnie snoring loudly from the living room, I giggled because he was so loud.

Once I told her I had an hard time sleeping.. she said I could sleep with Ronnie. I shrugged my shoulders, knowing well enough she couldn't see me. I said "okay." with a confused tone. It'd be weird sleeping with Ronnie, but I decided I wasn't going to.
 Well, it might have made me feel safe and secure for at least a bit, but I wasn't going to sleep with him, for all I know he's just a stranger from the streets my mom happened to love.  I told her I missed her alot, and she missed me too. "I love you" I said. She said it back.

 It was getting late, I picked up the remote of the television and hit the guide button. It was already 9 pm. My mom silently called out my name on the phone. She told me that she had to go because the doctors told her to get some rest. I told her okay, I told her I love her one last time.

Then, I hung up the old phone and I walked down the dark hallway. I almost bumped into the corner of the wall entering Ronnie's master bedroom. I looked around Ronnie's room, it was pretty big compared to all the other bedrooms in the house. He had a little blue night light by the side of his night stand, which was kinda cute and kinda weird, considering a grown man had a night light. I didn't really care too much about it.
Whatever floats your boat, I thought.  Plus, it helped you out so you could see where you were walking.

I walked over the the light Carolina blue couch beside Ronnie's bed, grabbed a soft blanket and covered up. My eyes kept trying to close on me, but I tried to stay awake even though I happened to be super exhausted. Soon enough, I was fast asleep without knowing it...

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