Title: NaruHina and SasuSaku or just SasuSaku
I don't have a problem with SasuSaku fanfics but don't say your fanfic is NaruHina and SasuSaku when its over 85% SasuSaku.
I was reading a Fanfic just this morning thinking it was going to NaruHina and SasuSaku. I kept reading and reading. And I was like what the fuck? Where is NaruHina at???
Katherine: That hoe lied like a bitch😐
Sakura: "Cha! What's wrong with SasuSaku?"
Ino: 😐 no one said anything wrong with it.
Ino take her away.
Ino *takes Sakura away*
Katherine: as I was saying.. .
No! AS I WAS SAYING.
I'm reading this fanfic expecting NaruHina and SasuSaku, But its only really just SasuSaku. To be honest both ships was kinda forced in the story.
The relationships going down like this. SasuSaku forced to be married, NaruHina forced to be married.
Naruto has a crush on Sakura I guess, Sakura kinda likes Sasuke I guess but she really kinda acting like she dont give a fuck at the sametime until someone hurt her feelings. Sasuke don't give a fuck about Sakura or anyone, seriously Sasuke doesn't love anyone not even he's own brother who alive in the story, he cares and like him but he doesn't love him. As for Hinata she loves Naruto, And she seems like the only person that 100% knows their feelings.Anyways I'm reading and reading and most of the story focus' on Sakura or SasuSaku, its like 5 chapters sasusaku then a half chapter of NaruHina. Its ridiculous NaruHina can barely have one conversation in 8 chapters. And I don't even why I said it was alot of SasuSaku its not really that either now that I think about it. Sakura has made a good friendships with nearly every guy but Sasuke. You see Sakura x Sai , Sakura X Sasori, Sakura x Itachi all was way better then Sasuke and Sakura. The extras in the book even thought Sakura was dating Sai or Sasori. Realistically when people finially see her with Sasuke they should think she's a slut or whore. Don't think like "what the fuck she just say", you all know most people yall live or been around are judgmental people they're everywhere. Sadly.
Honestly I thought Itachi and Sakura made a good couple in this story or Sasori and Sakura and I dont ship neither to be honest. It was just a good relationship on how the story was being told. And I just noticed how guys keep coming to Sakura rescue on every little thing it was ridiculous because they was coming out of no where.
Me: "okay yall extra people just gone pop in the story and pop out just like that?"
The story was going to point where it wasn't even focusing on all the main characters at all. It mainly focus on Sakura and her problems. I had to stop reading it, I didn't leave a comment of anything I just stopped reading completely. I don't like stories like that, no I don't mean Sakura stories don't go there. I mean stories that suppose to have multiple main characters but only focus' on one character thats just poor writing in my opinion. Plus it was making Sakura a how alot of people say "mary sue character" thats a bad look on Sakura she's a original character but the story made her mary sue.
It'd be a different situation if the story and plot was only supposed to be about Sakura, But that wasn't the case. This person made a story that was originally supposed to be about Sakura, Sasuke, Naruto and Hinata and just made it about Sakura. I understand in the story Sasuke didn't want this relationship and realistically he should be hard to get but that don't mean kick him out the story we don't even get his point of view. Naruto barley in the story but there mange to be more NaruSaku moments with Sakura whining to Naruto like every other guy in the book. Hinata just gets hurt every bit of the story she's in and she just sits there and waits for Naruto to come around like a good wife I guess. While Sakura with every other guy in the village.
HEY! Don't go thinking "what the fuck" or "no she didn't" I didn't write the damn book. I'm just saying.
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Naruto Rant Book
Non-FictionWhy you looking at the description? The Title is self explanatory. Oh what, you wanted more details? Then Read the first page. LMAO HINATA WAS HERE!!!!