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"Hannah," my boyfriend Ryan called out to me, "could ya come here for a sec'?" I hopped off my bed and walked into the living to find him sitting on my couch. Next to him was my older brother Shawn. Ryan was extremely gorgeous. He had soft light brown hair and to-die-for blue eyes. He was lightly tanned and his muscles were toned. Shawn and I were identical. We both had medium blonde hair, gray eyes, and small frames.
"Yeah babe?" I sat next to him. He wrapped his arm around me.
"Would you please explain to your brother that the two years we've dated we have been on many dates. I mean," he gave Shawn a goofy look, "it's what boyfriends and girlfriends do." Shawn gave Ryan a little punch.
"Well maybe if Shawn got out some and talked to girls, he would, I dunno, actually understand the meaning of dates." I winked at him playfully.
He moved to face me more directly. "I have you know I have been on many dates with many girls. But that's not my point."
I ruffled his hair and talked in a deeper, silly voice. "Of course it's not." He pushed my hand away. "Anyways, I gotta get ready for tonight." I walked out of the room.
I pushed my closet door open and started scanning through my shirts. Suddenly, Ryan's arms wrapped around my waist and his lips kissed my neck. A strong, tingly sensation went down my body. I moaned quietly. He started nibbling and barely sucking. I loved when he kissed my neck. He slowly when up to my earlobe and nibbled at it.
"Babe," I whispered, "slow down. I have to get ready."
He slowly backed away and laid on my bed, watching me. "Have I ever told you how beautiful you are?"
I chuckled. "Only everyday." I continued looking through my wardrobe. I ended up picking out a light pink shirt and comfty dark denim jeans. "I'mma hop in the shower real quick okay?"
He nodded. "Care if I join?"
I started pulling off my shirt. "Anytim-" He started getting up, "but now." He slumped back into the bed. I showered, washing my hair and body. I slipped outta the shower and wrapped a towel around my wet body. I walked out from my bathroom to my bedroom. Ryan was perched on my bed, watching me still. I closed my door.
I turned around and faced Ryan. I let my towel drop. He gave me sexy look. I slowly walked over to my bed and climbed on it. Ryan laid back and I hovered over him. He tangled his fingers in my hair, pulled my face down and kissed me. I stripped away his clothes and kissed every inch of his body. He rolled over on top of me. My heart was pounding. He went in. I gasped in pleasure. It was slow and meaningful. I moaned quietly, panting. My fingers dug into his back. He kissed me wildly.
"Hannah, Hannah." He slowly said, out of breath. He went faster. He slowed.
"Baby, I love you." I whispered in ear once we were done. He wrapped his arms around me tightly. "I need to get ready."
"I love you Hannah."
I put on my clothes and brushed out my wild hair. Once it was untangled I curled it to perfection. I applied make-up. I walked into my room to find Ryan and his clothes gone. I smiled. I found him in the living room.
"You ready to go?" Ryan asked. His hair was messed up.
"Ryan your hai-" was all I could get out before my sister interrupted, walking into the room.
"We all know what you were doing." Lisa said. She was fourteen and a child of the Devil. Not just mean but evil. She had black hair and brown eyes taking after Mom. We seldom spoke but when we did it usually ended in fights. I couldn't stand her and she likewise. "Whore," she muttered under her breath walking past me.
"That's it." I said. I walked up to her, grabbed a handfull of hair and yanked her back hard. She gasped. "If you don't with this iggnorant shit Lisa-"
"Hannah! Let her go!" Ryan yelled at me. He knew how we were, the hate and fighting. I did. I didn't care that I hurt her. Stupid girl needs to watch her mouth.
Lisa rubbed the back of the head. "Stupid bitch." She spat.
"Watch it, Lisa! One day I won't be here and you'll regret ever saying anything like that to me!"
"Yeah." She slowly sulked back into the hallway." 'One day' ".
Ryan turned to me in surprise. "Let's go before anything else happens."
We arrived at the movies a little before seven. We had a nice dinner, not mentioning the previous fight between Lisa and I. The place smelled like popcorn and candy. We bought our tickets and found our room. Ryan and I talked while the pre-show music played. Finally, the lights dimed and the previews started.
About halfway through the movie I got up to go to the restroom. "Where ya going babe?"
"Bathroom."
"Okay, give me a kiss." I did. "Love you," he said smiling.
"I love you too." And walked out the room and to the bathroom.
"I love your jeans," this girl said, a few years older than me while I was washing my hands.
"Thanks," I smiled politely. Next thing I knew, her fist connected to my face hard. I turned to her in astonishment. Then before I could speak, she brought her knee up fast to my stomach, making me sputter, and she elbowed me right in the head. Then, everything went black.
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