"the unfinished dreams"

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This one is my second story .hehe nag published ako agad ng

bago dahil sa isang negative comment na narinig ko sa isang

tao hehehe anyways its okay I'm expecting some bad comments

naman talaga and because I'm a newbie .. wala naman po siguro

masamang magkamali .. kc tao Lang haha ..

before I start let me just introduce to you my source of this story

well its a True to life story of my mom .. Luningning Aliwalas . :)

sariling experience nya sa college life niya ..

na shinare nya sakin para ma I share ko din sainyo ..

and the story goes like this ..

Its way back from 1987 at the Harris Memorial College in Antipolo

its a methodist school that's exclusive for girls . meaning ung

mga nagaaral dito ay pinagaaral o scholar ng mga priest .

its just like a common university na maraming courses na inoofer

but unlike the other hindi allowed na lumabas ng university ang

mga students meaning .. pra silang nasa isang kumbento

na makakalabas lang pag may permit .at hangang sa matapos nla

ang course na kinukuha .

in every 1 cr. ay 10 girls ang mag sshare .. at sa bawat isang room

5 girls ang magkaka sama ..

and that includes my mother her friend Leny Yayin Joan and

minerva ..

Leny was the eldest among the 4

yayin is the craziest

joan is the kikay my mom was the typical lang .. medyo serious

at seryoso and minerva she's the smart girl .

One thursday afternoon after their social study class the 5 girls

decided to

buy a snack at the schools cafeteria .and sit to their favorite spot

they were chatting while eating when they suddenly recognized

their friend minerva was not paying attention to them .., because

she's busy reading the letter that his boyfriend sent to him

yesterday she don't let her friend read the letter but she said that

she was

going out on saturday she ran off to the deans office to have a

permit pass for Sunday ..

when she comeback she was so happy and excited she keep on

smiling while looking to her permit

Leny - maybe she really miss her boyfriend that's why she's

like that ..

Joan - naun ko lang sya nakitang ngumiti ng ganyan ..

Yayin- inLove kase

HahhahahHhHHahHahH ...

update us girl kung anung mangyyare sa date nyo ha ;)- my mom

they keep on bullying minerva .. but it seem like minerva was

too happy that she can't even hear them ..

Friday----saturday had pass those past two days was really a

happy day for their friend minerva .

its Sunday morning .no classes and its minervas day . minerva

woke up early in the morning and prepare the clothes she was

going to wear she left the school 10 am to be exact

" Its already 3pm already I wonder what minerva and her boyfriend

was doing right now .. -yayin

" I want to have a boyfriend too so I will be happy just like her

- Leny

Hours had pass quickly .. and its already 10 in the evening right

now minerva was still not here ..

the friends was starting to panic

after 1 and a half of waiting minerva finally come

Its already 11:30 now what happen to you? its just a few

minutes left for the gate to closed were so worried bout you

- my mom

They are all waiting for minervas response but .. the only thing

she said is

"Ah ...ano...ahm..kase Na traffic ako "

the girls was not convince with what minerva say

they was confused of minervas expression..its kinda different

Monday morning its back to school .. the four was chatting while

minerva is not paying attention to them ...

tulala sya na parang may malalim na iniisip ..

--------------------------End of Part1--------------------------

hi guys :) I just finished the first part of the story .. comment here for your suggestions I will published the next part next time if I ain't busy :) Note guys this one is not a fiction.. hope you enjoy the first part and please continue to read my stories

Many Thanks To kaizer Amor for letting me used her name on my first story "on the 13th Floor"

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"Unfinished Dreams"

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 28, 2013 ⏰

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