Princess Of Thieves *Revising*

Chapter 20 ~Princess Of Thieves~

King's P.O.V

Then the thieves got on The king's son spyth the dragon and flew in the nights sky blowing fire for no reason. The king put his sword up to the sky and every man woman and child put their weapons up too. The draw bridge opened in front of us and we rode on their horses in the black fog that went on forever. Suddenly they came to a slow.  There was movement ahead of them. Three men rode on black stallions, holding lanterns in hand. One had a crown the size of stone from the castle's pond.

Then suddenly the three men turn out to be an army a lot bigger then their soilders or villagers together. The other king saw them and held up his sword. His army did the same.  Then as fast as lighting their weapons were gone. All that was Left was a shadow of a girl, the king's daughter. "Boo!" The shadow said. The other kingdoms horses went chaos as the image was now a snake racing near their feet.  "Stop this madness!" The other king bellowed. The King of BayFeild  smirked to himself.  "Sorry I have a bad ear say that again!" He said.

"I said-" The other king tried. "Attack!" The king of Bayfeild finished. The soilders and villagers charged to the shocked king. The other king had no choice but to fall back. His men raced as fast as they could go. But a Dragon a ten foot tall black dragon swooped down and landed in front of them not letting them pass. Jade and the other thieves slid off.

Jade's P.O.V

 Jade slid off the dragon still thinking how cool the shadows were that spyth made all with his mind. " Well Mr. Whats your face? Are you going to surrender??" Jade asked walking to the other  king.  "I-I No, well... uh-" He tried. "Let me help you with that." Jade said and pulled out a knife and put it to his throat, his atoms apple bobbing right above it. "What is it? Peace? Or die?" Jade asked digging it in more into his neck. "Never!" He spit in Jade's face then kicked her. She flew into the dirt. The other king started running leaving a very confused army behind.          

"Jagger! Ally!" Jade screamed. They nodded in under standing and jumped on their own horses and raced after him. Spyth didn't need her to say it, he blew a ring of fire around the other army so no one could escape. Jade's father then trotted over and helped her up. "Jade what ever happens just know I love you." She nodded and in a flash she took off on his horse to help ally and Jagger. "No wait!" She heard him say and then a loud chuckle.

Jade caught up with Ally and Jagger on Cliff side, they surrounded him making it impossible for an escape. "Give up already!" Jade croaked. "Ha ha ha, silly children they always fall for that trick." He said with a chuckle. Then his eyes turn cold and changed to red color his body felt limp and he fell over. The horse took off running. A small storm cloud was left spinning in circles like a soul walking on earth.

Then it turned into the shape of a man a bubble like some kind of force field around the man. " Soul claimer!" Ally and Jade gasped at the same time.  "It has been a very long time since I heard my own name dear thanks for reminding me." The dark figure said.  "But I thought you were a Myth!" Jagger said putting one foot in front of Ally just in case the figure striked.  

"But dear boy all myths are true! Uh like my dear friends the unicorns. GONE. Or my friends the dodo birds. GONE. All wiped out by myself sucked their soul out and BAM their my food." It said. Jagger gulped. "Dodo?" Jagger mumbled. "Yes my boy and now its time for you all to die." The wind picked up at a very fast pace spinning and spinning like a top. "Jade!" Spyth said running to Jade.

"NO spyth go! Run!" Jade screamed. "I leave no sister behind! "He shouted over the wind. "Ally quick how do you stop soul claimer??" Jade asked. "Well we have to get his force field down first, then Spyth since he's not really alive, has to suck him into his ring." Ally  yelled.

"Nope!" The soul said then a gust of wind knocked them down on the dirt. "Oww I think I broke something" Spyth said. He pulled a dragon ring out of his pocket, it was cracked right in the middle. "Ha ha ha ha" The soul laughed. "There is no way you can stop me now." He said. Ally looked at Jade with sad eyes. "Jade the only way to brake the shield is if he eats some ones soul." Ally said then held Jaggers hand. They stared in each others eyes and kissed a good long kiss before the soul claimer grabbed their souls. Their bodies crumpled to the ground and a tiny figure of the two of them skipping together. A tear rolled down her face.

Spyth quickly pushed her out of the way so the soul claimer couldn't get her. She forced herself to focus. She got to her feet and jumped out of the way of the soul claimer's reach. "Jade we must cut his center soul to free all souls and to get ally and Jagger in theirs bodies or its too late." Spyth said. Jade grabbed her extra dagger while dogging the soul claimer. Spyth found a sharp stone and together they charged. "Spyth throw your weapon on the count of three!" Jade yelled. They got closer and closer with every step.          

"1!"

"2!"

"3!"

They threw their weapons into the soul hitting his center on target. Jade and Spyth then jumped off to a side in the dirt and looked up to see what was happening. The wind died and a new light started in side of the monster. Other souls good souls shot out of its chest and surrounded them. Then Jade noticed some one. "Hey! Markeus??" Jade said. The sprit glided over to her. He nodded. "Oh Jade I am so proud of you!" He said with a smile. Spyth looked at him and then cleared his throat. "Oh spyth uh yea you did good too." Markeus said. Spyth nodded.

                                "AHHHH!" The soul claimer yelled. He was being tackled by so many souls that he didn't stand a chance. "Well I think you guys got this covered."Spyth said helped Jade up. "Bye markeus! Thanks for the help." Jade said. He smiled then looked at the night sky and shimmered away. "Well sis shall we celebrate??" Spyth asked. "Yes we shall!" Ally said joining them  along with Jagger.

"OP! OP! OP! Gangman style!" They all sang.

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                        ~ The End ~