ADIVCES

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Hey guys,
I just wanna know how's my story this far. Give me some advices and feedbacks. So I could make this story better. Help me as you know this my first story and I have no experiences at all. Please bare with my grammatical errors and typos and all because English is not my first language thank you :) Please let me know what I should improve. Please. Just please comment some advices. I appreciate all of each advices. Once again, thank you very much! :)

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