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Luna

She stood there before me, my daughter, Luna. I adopted her 5 years ago when she was a mere 1 year old, today is now her 6th birthday and she is still short (even for her age), her dirty blond hair is as long as her back but tied up in a french braid right now. Luna (or Lu as I like to call her) has the biggest green eyes that remind me of freshly cut grass in winter, I know that's very specific but there is just no other way to describe her.
Her favourite colour is pink and so everything at her birthday party is pink too, the decorations, presents and she even has a pink cake and party hats too.

"Mummy can we cut the cake now?" She asks me in her high pitched 6 year old voice.

"Sure sweetie, go get your friends and I'll get the cake." I love my daughter.

Hey guys i know the description isn't completely awesome but it's my first one with this book comment on what you thought of it and what you think i can improve on.

Peace out<3