Surprise visit

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This is my first story. please comment so i can improve! :D

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I paused for a moment when i heard my mother yell", SABRINNNAA COME HERE! YOU HAVE A VISITOR!!!!"

My first instinct told me that it was  my creepy neighbor that always just pops by to talk to my brother and secretly check me out.

I'm delighted to see Damien,my best friend, since we hardly had any classes together.

Damien is 6 foot and all the girls drool over him. I guess that is how he became my best friend, I didn't like him for his looks, I like to get to know a person from the inside. We are the most talked about people in school and its funny how I still manage to get a 4.0 in all my classes.

Ever since 6th grade,  I have had the biggest crush on him but I was always too afraid to tell him. I have finally gotten up the courage to tell him how I really feel about him the next time i saw him. I guess today is my lucky day.

"Hey Bri, sorry i didn't call before I came.", Damien exclaimed. "It's fine! I was just gonna call you anyway!" I smiled just at the sight of him. He says," Let's hang out today! Right now for that matter! I have a few ideas on what we can do!"

I barely have enough time to grab my phone and some money before Damien yanks me out if the door. "Bye Sabrina, remember, no later than 11, I love you."

" I know---", I said. That was the last thing i said before I was whisked away into Damien's old blue mustang.

"Where are we going?", I said. "Wait and see", he managed to say through his smirk. He knows I hate surprises but he does it anyway, lucky me!

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