A Second Chance (Adopted by Team Crafted)

A/N (a bit of a rant I guess)

I was ready Cliches In Wattpad or Wattpad cliches and stuff and I saw this one that I compared to my books.

(By the way it's by catlovescats123 and it's really good so go check it out)

It said there was always this blonde haired slut and I thought of the character Madison.

First off, Madison is not blonde. I never designed her to be blonde. She has brown hair and hazel - greeny eyes.

Secondly, Madison isn't a slut. That bitch is so full of herself that she's turned down very guy that's asked her out. The only person that she likes is Dai, who likes Amber. But Amber doesn't like him and she's NEVER going to like him.

Which brings me onto Dai.

Dai is a lot like Kitty. He has her hair color and skin tone (he doesn't have green eyes, or chocolate brown eyes. Their actually a pale blue/browny blue. Shocker). He's like Kitty, but he does not Kitty's build, if that makes sense. He does work out but is not one of those Zak Effron/Taylor Laughtner/that guy that is so hot it's not funny.

Kitty, Evie, Mia, Aura, Sofie (going to be introduced) and Amber are not those incredibly slim, flawless girls. They are all fit, but so not incredibly slim that they're like super models. Evie is probably that bit more fit because she actually does sports. She also games which means she's that tiny bit fitter. None are overweight, and they are just like ordinary people.

I'm gonna clear something up. Madison likes Dai, but a lot of girls think that Madison is Dai's girlfriend. So he's not that guy everyone wants. Some girls like Dai even though Madison likes him. Also some girls in homeroom like Mitch, actually.

But they won't because he's Evie's boyfriend, ya bithes. And they'll find that out soon.

So some like Dai, some like Mitch (who doesn't even GO to their school) and the rest either have boyfriends or are single. And when I say some, I mean a small group of 10 or 15.

Also, Amber does not want Dai. And she's not going to ever want him. Pretty soon, she's gonna like someone else (not an oc by the way).

Also this book will have no smut or moments where the person is like 'he touched my arm and smiled and sparks flew.' That is so cliche it makes me want to bury my head in a bucket of water, barf, then die. I try not to do cliche moments because let's be honest, no one likes them.

As you can see, I have done kisses and cut falls because I like cute falls. When I did the fall with Evie and Mitch, he held her there and kind of realised that she liked him. And the fall in Every Star In The Sky was because the character tripped.

Also the fall wasn't like one of those disney movie scenes with stupid music. It was legitimately I tripped, thanks for breaking my fall kind of thing. Not this

"I fell accidentally on purpose and gazed into his eyes and realised he was hot BLAH BLAH BLAH."

It was legitimately I tripped. Have you realised that they trip accidentally and not one of those stupid falls you see in movies. And when they get held there, it's because they don't really know what to do and it's akward.

If your crush caught you, you would have no idea what to do because it's akward. So I'm just trying to be real here.

So I'll go over the characters.

-Amber. She's the main character. Sarcastic, YouTuber, Gamer, tomboy. She's not a nobody but isn't popular either. She's also NOT a nerd. She's good at maths, but hates doing it. If she had to write a letter about Math, this is what she'd write.

Dear math.

I don't know your x and I don't know y she left you. I can't be bothered to figure it out so shut the fuck up and leave me alone. Amber XC

-Evie. An important part of Amber's life. Gamer, YouTuber, Sporty, Musical, Artistic. She's alright at math but doesn't like it that much. She likes writing and pranking people. Not the girl next door.

-Kitty. An important part of Amber's life. Gamer, YouTuber, Lazy, Creative. Hates math. Often the funny one. Also hates Dai and has an obsession for kittens. She's not an over obsessed fan because she believes it's wrong to stalk people because you should be able to have some privacy. She's the fan who has met them and has merch.

-Madison. Amber would pay money to see her get run over. Girly, sarcastic. A bitch. Likes to tease people and would stalk 1D. Hates tomboys. A bitch. Snuff said.

-Dai. Amber doesn't care much about him but wouldn't pay to see him run over because he's Kitty's cousin. If he wasn't, yes. Flirty, Sporty. Always likes the girl he can never get because she doesn't care. Amber's too much of a badass to care.

-Team Crafted. Amber cares about them. Gamers, YouTubers, funny, sarcastic, lazy, flawless. All words Amber would use to describe them. She considers them the brothers she never had.

-Aura and Mia. Amber cares about them all. Gamers, YouTubers, funny, sarcastic. Both Mia and Aura are artistic in their own ways. Aura is amazing at making maps of any kind. Mia likes singing and drawing.

-Phoebe. One of Amber's best friends even if she doesn't hang out with her 24/7. Gamer, YouTube, funny, sarcastic, sporty. Phoebe LOVES GTA and gmod but doesn't play Minecraft much. She also likes watching YouTube and is considering vlogging. She also likes sports.

So that was a bit about the characters and hints aboyt future updates *nudge nudge.* Also I realised something. In a lot of fanfictions the main charcter is actually Adam's sister or Ty's cousin and shit. Well, that's not happening. I don't particularly like fanfics where people includd themselves. It ruins it.

But certain people make the fanfic better when they include themselves. *nudges AnimeGirlcx*

DO ITTTTT

I was reading a Team Crafted fanfic the other day, and the author included herself in the story. And I stopped reading it because it ruined it. But there was this one fanfic by OliviaLovesSnow and she included herself.

AND IT MADE IT BETTER.

Also why does EVERYONE like Mitch? We all know that he's flawless but why not Jerome or Jason or Deadlox?

(Actually not Deadlox xx_kittylox_xx will kill you)

We all know Mitch is flawless but I see soooooooooooo many fanfics where the girl likes Mitch. He has a girlfriend you know. (Actually according to Evie_Descendants_1's friend Zane he currently doesn't have a girlfriend at the moment)

Evie: no

Me: YEEEEEEES

Evie: nooo

Me: *nodding* yeeeeeeeeesss *shoves Mitch towards Evie* GO MAKE OUT! *runs away*

So that was a bit of a rant! If you've done stuff I've said, please don't take it personally and change your writing. I am not directing this at anyone. Also pratically EVERYONE I follow hasn't done this.

Also this is a note.

If you want to include yourself in a fanfic, don't make it obvious. You stuck on charcters? Base them off real-life people. I did that with Phoebe.

See you soon!

~Katelyn cx

P.S I'm halfway through finishing chapter thirteen!! Yaaay!!