The Present Day

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 It's a sunny day in Springville and a perfect time to go outside and spend time with your friends and family. The sun was shine and flowers were blooming, and everything was ideal for the day Anne had planned for her daughter.  Today is May 6 Raven's birthday, and she is turning 17. Raven was looking forward to her seventeenth birthday for a while because she finally gets her car.

"Knock-knock, it's me, may I come in?" Anne says.

"Yea ma, you can come in," Raven said still halfway sleep.

" Happy birthday my little butterfly." 

"Aww, mom. thank you so much."

" So I have a whole day planned for ya birthday. we're gonna go to the carnival, go shopping, go to the movies, and then go to ya favorite ice cream place."

"Karaoke Fever."

" Yup, that's the one."

"Aww, mom you didn't have to go through all this for my birthday."

"It's ya seventeenth birthday, of course, I'm gonna go out of my way for you."

"Mom you are the best"

"Oh, and hurry up and get dress and come outside there is something waiting for you."

"Ok ma."

Raven jump out of bed and went to the bathroom to shower. She was in the shower for a good half an hour, but what do you expect she's a girl. As soon as Raven got out the shower and into her room, she did her hair and got dress. Raven was hoping that her mom got her the car that she dream of having.

A purple sports car with black leather seats surrounds sound, navigation, and Bluetooth

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A purple sports car with black leather seats surrounds sound, navigation, and Bluetooth. She fell in love with that car when she saw it at the dealership. Raven rushed downstairs to her brand new car.

"Oh mom you got me my car, but how I thought you couldn't afford it," Raven says

" I save up enough money from last year, and I got you the sports car," Anne says

"I know I already said it, but Mom you are the best."

" Ha-ha, I know. Now are you ready for the best birthday you or anyone for that matter could ever have."

" Can I drive?"

"Of course."

Raven and Anne got in the purple sports car and drove off. The first thing they did was go to the carnival. Raven and Anne got on to a lot of rides and had tons of fun.

" Mom let's get on the rollercoaster," Raven says

"Oh, I don't know." Anne says

"come on mom please that's the only ride we haven't gotten on."

"Ok, it is ya birthday."

"Yay, I love you, mom."

"I love you more."

"I love you most."

"Not possibly."

After they had got off the rollercoaster, Raven and Anne went shopping. They got a lot of new clothes and shoes and had a lot of fun as well. After shopping, they went to the movies to see "Captain America: Civil War,"then they went the Raven's favorite ice cream place karaoke fever.

"Mom this day was by far the best day of my life." Raven says

"I told you it would be."anne says



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