just a normal guy

problems

-I take a seat in the slipstream 2-
are u guys sure this will work?
it will be fine love
I think it should work
-tracer slaps him-
it's gonna work
-Winston moves he's glasses I believe I made everything the same
-I start the plane and take off I see a blue light start to glow as the plane starts to fade and so do I -
I think it's working I'm fading with the ship
FADING your not supposed to fade it just disappeared
-the plane and I disappear and the mic doesn't work-
um guys hello
-I feel my body leave the plane as if it's gone or I'm gone I get a sudden feel of falling as I look down and see the ground and I fall down through the atmosphere catching on fire on re-entering the earth's I see water I try to move to it but it gets smaller and smaller till it all appears to be earth my view gets closer as I can see a street I get really close and I get worried-
I'm gonna die this is it atleast I meet my hero
-the ground gets close as i feel my heart beat one last time-
I'm sorry Lena
-I feel a crash and snapping as I lay covered in blood I hear a familiar sound as I start to black out and all I can mutter is-
I'm sorry
-I feel my hand being held softly like an angel is here to take me I pass out-

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-tracers point of view-
tracker ur gonna be fine love
yeah it should work
-I look at rienhart-
really mate, tracker it will be fine I promise u will be ok
-Winston fixes his glasses-
I believe I made everything exactly right
-I see him leave as I go meet Winston at the control room-
how is he doing Winston
he mumbled something about fading
FADING HE SHOULDNT BE FADING
-I grab the mic-
max what's happening up there
the ship is fading like yours did
mine disappeared not faded
-I move the mic-
something isn't right I'm gonna go look for him
-we hear static and the sound ends incompletely-
shit I'll be back
-I grab my jacket and run around looking for something weird when I ask a cop he said he seen some guy parachuting in a restricted airspace and I took off back to HQ and I see something falling-
shit no max it's gonna be ok
-the ball of whatever is falling Chetchs on fire-
MAX NOOO
-I dash as fast as I can as it hits the ground-
-everyone comes out and looks for me as I run up to the body-
max I'm so sorry
-I hold his hand and cry as rienhart tries to move me-
tracer you can't just sit here and feel like shit
I CAN I TOLD HIM IT WOULDD BE OK NOW HE IS DEAD
-he body glows as his body rewindeds back twenty seconds- 
throw me now rienhart
-he picks me up and throws me at him and I hold him-
he's still knocked out
-I use my speed and angleing to land into rienhart-
mercy is he ok
-I get pulled off of him and dragged onto the ship-
no no please
you know mercy will help him just stay here so she can do her work
I know she will but it's my fault I wanna be the first person he sees when he wakes up
-mercy comes in with Winston carrying max and carries him to his room and I sit by max-
when will he wake up mercy
I don't even know if he will live
-I look at her crying-
this isn't fair it never is

-a week goes by tracer doesn't leave his side people get worried and ask if she's ok while max stays in a coma and he is half awake in the coma As he can hear and barely see what's happening but can't move or interact all he thinks is how he is hurting her-