A Broken One's Demise 1/3

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This is my AU, it has Brokentale in it....that was my very first AU EVER for Undertale, so why not go torture poor little Crev....he's already half blind before his true pacifist ending where he is completely blind, so yeah....I get to torture Crev....SORRY MY BROKEN BABY CINNAMON ROLL!!!

Also, I hurt Goat Bro and Murder Child DON'T KILL ME...also blood and guts because not skeletons


(we are starting a few days after last chapter)


"Hey, Blackberry...come 'ere." Blue said, gesturing for Error to walk over to him, and Error did as told. He seen Blue watching an AU in which seemed slightly familiar. He noticed the Sans, and knew he had seen the AU before. The Sans had on a blue and orange hoodie, long, navy blue pants, and had a huge crack on the right side of his skull. "You know what AU this is?" Blue asked, somewhat curiously. Error shook his head, obviously lying. "I wanna go and torture him like I did Spacey and Death, as well as Geno and that little brat of their child." Blue told his prisoner, a wicked smile on his face as he did. Error had already learned to live with his chaotic and insane new "room mate." "Now come on Blackberry, this is going to be fun!"  Blue said, and Error opened the portal fully, and the two left for probably the fifth time in the last few days.

It was always the same thing, Error and Blue arrived, Blue tied Error up, found the alternate Sans and if there were anybody with him, then as well, then tortured the Sans to death, after murdering the rest of the AU characters...but this time....Blue wasn't JUST going to torture Sans...oh no he had much more planned. He decided to search Snowdin for anybody who he could torture for a while. He heard two kids talking, and seen that it was the Dreemurr siblings(A/N: I love calling them that), Chara and Asriel. He smiled evilly, knowing these two were perfect to torture for a while. He grabbed both of them with his strings, and along with Error, teleported them into the Ruins...since nobody, not even Toriel, lived their anymore.

"Azzy...did you just do that?" Chara asked, shaking her head, hoping she wasn't going crazy.

"N....No....I don't know even HOW to teleport." Asriel said, looking down to see the blue strings around his and his sister's waists. He pointed to the strings on her before they heard clapping....loud clapping...the Ruins being so big....made it extremely loud due to the echoing of sound.

"Smart kids, noticing how you got here, usually it takes the other AUs like a few minutes before they see they're tied up...oh I guess since you two are so smart you can find some way to stop me." Blue smiled, and when he walked out, both kids stared.

"Sans!?" They yelled in unison, and Blue just laughed.

"Well, I am A Sans, but not YOUR Sans...he's still with your mom and Frisk....meanwhile, I will gladly be the Sans you hang around with." Blue said, and both kids began to dangle above the floor from the strings. Chara realized that was a pun and made a face of "OH GOSH SHUT UP!" and Blue just laughed evilly at the two. Asriel, now attempting at escape, was getting slowly wrapped up in more strings, making it unable for him to move his waist area, as well as his arms, as they were also tied up. Blue walked closer to the goat, and rubbed a hand under the ear, as if attempting to get in good position to pet the south left of the back of the goat's head. His fingers were sharp and painful on Asriel's soft fur. Chara stared at Blue, her eyes turning red, beginning to drip the black and red liquid it did....her excess DETERMINATION showing physically, which only happens on one of a few, very few, occasions, you hurt Asriel, you hurt Frisk, you hurt Sans, your hurt Toriel, you hurt Papyrus, or you hurt all of them or multiple of them. Blue turned his head to see Chara mad, and he decided he would leave Asriel alone. He pet Asriel's head and walked over to Chara. He put a hand  near her face and she tried to bite it. "Oh, are you trying to bite me!? Rude little girl, you don't bite me. Guess I'll have to remove these." Blue said, and, knowing exactly what he was doing, sent a bunch of strings into Chara's mouth, each wrapping around an individual tooth. He smiled at her, and she began crying the red ooze that had came from her eyes as she felt her teeth be forcefully ripped out, one by one.

"CHARA!!!" Asriel screamed, crying. He tried to close his eyes, but Blue turned to him, and used his strings to rip Asriel's eyelids off. Asriel yelled, and Error hid his eyes from looking at the children. Chara's teeth landed on the floor, each with a small clink noise as they did. She cried, and wouldn't stop crying, and eventually, she tasted blood...she has done this before, on accident, but she couldn't help it, and Blue decided he would use a few strings to tilt her head up so she swallowed the blood. He kept pulling teeth out, dangling them in front of Chara's eyes, and Asriel stared in horror and disgust as he watched his sister get her mouth brutally ripped apart. Chara screamed as it happened, and trying to cough out the blood didn't help, it only choked her more. Finally, Blue released his grip and let her onto the ground. She puked up a lot of blood and some gums and roots from where her teeth had been pulled out. There was blood dripping from her mouth and onto her hand as she sat there for a minute, trying to just breath. Asriel was just trying to comprehend this situation. He stared at his poor choking sister, and his tears wouldn't stop, when he felt something grab his ear, his left ear to be precise.

"Now just hold still small child....this will only hurt a second...." Blue whispered into Asriel's right ear, as he used his strings to rip the other off...the fur being ripped off first, then Blue rewrapped the strings around the flesh underneath. It burned....a lot. Asriel whimpered like a puppy more than a goat as he felt it happen. Then, Chara pulled a knife out of her pocket and tried to stand up. She ran up to Blue, who turned around and grabbed the knife. "Rude child....first you bite me, now you try to stab me. Respect your guests. Tsk, tsk....You kind of children never learn." Blue said, and Chara pulled up her text box, since she and Frisk both have one

"You tell Blue to back off of you and your brother and leave."

"Leave? Why? We're having SUCH FUN!" Blue said, smiling at Chara, who's breath increased. "In fact, I think you could be a little more silent." Blue said, and he walked behind Chara, and put one hand on her shoulder, and one of her cheek. "Poor child....you're probably terrified right now, aren't you? Well, you are a smart child...You always were a smart child Chara....in any AU...except Outerswap....you broke your arm on a jetpack but....it doesn't matter....none of that matters...ALL THAT MATTERS IS THAT YOU AND EVERYBODY THAT IS AN AU IS AN UNSAFE ABOMINATION TO THIS MULTIVERSE." Blue said, a creepy smile crawling on his face as he grabbed Chara's knife. "Let me guess...your brother just wants you to smile is that correct?" Blue asked, Asriel nodded slowly. "Well...here you go then goat boy....she will smile....FOREVER..." Blue said, and he cut off some of Chara's skin to reveal her actual flesh, which he then cut off, blood splattered all over Chara's face, and she cried, she cried and cried until she couldn't stop crying....eventually you could see her skeleton, and she wouldn't stop crying....she had no teeth either so it was REALLY creepy....her mouth was just a black void with a tongue. Asriel stared in horror at his sister, and Blue turned to him. "Well....you have one wish....just wait for the rest of my job to be FINISHED...." Blue said, his eyes turning pitch black, and his smile widening, and for a split second, his pupils were an "x" and what looked like an eye that went from blue to black and back to blue. and there were dark color splashes behind that before his eyes went dark, and he tied Chara's now passes out body to the ceiling with her arms wrapped in strings...


The original ending got cut off but hey it's the same thing, just worded differently, creepypasta material much, yes, yes it is


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