Who Is Your Killer, Mr. Summer?

Chapter 1

"Are you really sure you want to do this?" she said concerned.

"I'm sure. I won't regret it." I said while she crossed her arms. Rolling my eyes, I grabbed my coat. I also opened the door in one swift motion.

"Well, see you then. I won't be able to change your mind." she chuckled. My reputation was already ruined here. One case you get wrong and all of the sudden everyone causes a commotion. All of those slanderous rumors of me ACTUALLY hating the victim. It had to stop. I was going to make it stop.

-----2 HOURS LATER-----

Finally seeing the new office gave me chills. It was built in a year, which is a short time to build a whole department, but it still revealed itself to be amazing.

"So, you like it? I came here this morning. Saw it before you didn't I?" I heard someone say. When I turned to the door, I saw my new boss. By boss, I mean head detective. I could never be head detective though, I lack determination. Sure, it sounds cliché but it's still true. On my last case I just gave up on the witnesses. I just couldn't confront them.

"You okay buddy? You zoned out."

"Umm... Yeah, sorry. Sometimes happens. So, any cases?"

"Woah bud, calm down. New department, new job, new cases. That's how it works. Don't rush it."

"Oh, well... I don't wanna seem like an outcast. You know, blend in with the others."

"There is this ONE case that nobody seems to want. It is a murder mystery, you up for the challenge?"

"Yeah, sure! I just want to forget about the past. A new life is the way to go."

"Okay then, let me get the case file." he said getting out of the room. I started putting down my stuff on the desk, including a lovely picture of my wife. She was the only person whom I cared for which didn't betray me. She always showed me the bright side of life. Being a detective and all you get lost in thoughts about all the murders. She was my inspiration all through this. My only inspiration...

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So, my first story. Good? Bad? What do you think?

This is a murder mystery kind of thing. Also, I probably won't update so frequently and I may not be good at expressing things bc you know, I'm 12 :P 

Be sure to leave a comment and give me feedback bc it'll help me A LOT. Thanks and baii <3

-It'sRainingMacaroni