Tryna love a thug

Chapter2

Date: July 5,2016
Time:10:45am
Place: Satavia mansion

I wake up and take a hot 30 min shower and do al my hygiene. When I got out the shower I threw a pair of Nike gym shorts and a white tee. I walked down the stairs and to see Satavia and August sitting on the couch with the boy I met last night Carlos. I say " hey everybody" they say hey back. So I walked in the kitchen and fix me a bowl of fruit loops and Carlos walks in the kitchen And bumps me. He turn around and look at me I say " excuse you " , he said what you gonna do. This boy is really testing me I say in my head. So I walked up to him and I looked into his hazel and green eyes and his lips touched mine and he passionately and softly kissed me for like 10 seconds. I pul away from the kiss and Satavia walks in the room and says what the fuck is wrong with yo fass ass your only 17 kissing a 20 year old. As a matter of fact get yo shit and get the fuck out my house. I look at her with tears in my eyes and run up the stairs. Then August says bae why did u have to do her like that ?? So I'm packing my things with tears rolling down my face and Carlos walks in the room and says clear yo face. I say why she kicked me out and I have no where to go. He says you can stay with me baby girl I have plenty of room. Are you sure cause I don't wanna crowd your place. Carlos says I'm sure I have plenty of room it won't be a problem. I then proceeded to say ok and I grab my bag and we go down the steps together. When I make it down the steps I say "bye I hope you have a better life now that I'm gone" she has a frown on her face and I walk out the door. Carlos puts my bags in his trunk and we got in the car and we drove off.💨💨💨
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How was that I know it wasnt long but I'm not use to writing books but I got a question do u think Satavia wrong for putting Audrianna out for that ??

Give me feedback is the book ok or is it boring be honest 💯💯

Also Satavia house is in the photo thing