This month's review:
A Love story by WorldPeace240
I read your story. I can say that It was really funny at some points and very entertaining.I love the plot and the hole storyline is well based at a regular life of a teenager. And you made your characters like typical teenagers although they were funny with charming personalities. But there are some things that you have to pay attention to, like, your vocabulary and grammar. you need to try to make your chapters a little more longer and try to add more description and a little more feelings and thoughts. Try to explain some things better though. With these I'm not saying that you're not a good writer or that the story is not good! I'm just saying how your story could become better! And I am sure with a good editing your book will have a lot of readers and fans! Good luck with your story!
-Well the story was nice - short and sweet- and it didn't took me a lot of time to finish it. I would suggest you toread it but the story does no longer exists and I don't know why.
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xoxoJasmine S.
