Shi no Tenshi (A Naruto Fan Fiction) [ON HOLD INTILL FINISHED EDITING]

Character Information

This is the very first fan fic that I have ever wrote, so I'd love some feedback. The story starts off at the start of Naruto and everyone is 13. To the side is a picture of Yoshino. Oh yah I don't own Naruto!

P.S. My spelling and grammer sucks.

Tsukiko and Yoshino’s history (they’re sisters):

They were born in a small village up in the mountains where it snowed all the time. When Yoshino was six and Tsukiko was four their village was attacked by rogue ninjas that were trying to steal the village’s treasure, a supposedly powerful cursed sword named Shi no Tenshi. They escaped with the sword and later met up with a group of gypsy like people and they lived with them when they were young, later they decided just to travel on their own.

Tsukiko- name means moon child

Age 12

Appearance:

- Big silver eyes

- Long black hair that reaches her stomach

- Pale skin

- Short/ looks a little like a little kid

- Wears a black jacket with a hood

- Wears black ninja shoes

- Black shorts that reach her upper thighs

- Has bandages under her shorts they reach her knees

- Wears regular black ninja shorts

- Extremely pretty

True Personality:

- Hates people thinking she’s a little girl because of her appearance

- Short attention span

- Has a bad temper

Outside Personality-

- When angry calm, collected

- Always kind

- Doesn't get mad a lot

- If you can tell that she's made then run because she WILL kill you :)

- Sometimes says things nicer then she thinks them

- Likes silence

About her:

   Her weapon of choice is her village's cursed sword, Shi no Tenshi, but she usually just uses a regular sword. She has all of the elements but prefers wind, lightning, and ice. Her sister trains her and she is extremely fast, like Rock Lee fast. She is basically a genus but hates showing it, she is so smart she can copy a jutsu she has seen once (like sharigun). She can summon a flow of crows/ transform into a crow.

Weaknesses:

  She  fears herself and her cursed sword.

Yoshino- name means Respectful, good

Age 14

Appearance:

- Long light brown hair

- Blue eyes

- Pale skin

- Tall

- Wears a black dress reaches her upper thighs with bandage shorts that her lower thighs

- Black ninja shoes

Attitude:

- Rude (will swear A LOT)

- Would kill any boy her makes a move on her sister

- Doesn't like silence

- Doesn't like showing that she likes her sister

- Very protective of her sister

- Nice in her own SPECIAL way

About her:

 She is a amazing tracker and she likes using Genjustu. She has a very beautiful singing voice that can sometimes put people in trances. She isn't a good mid-distance fighter but she either likes using Taijutsu or mostly Genjutsu. She can put chakra into her fists and legs (like Tsunade). She can do long distance lightning techniques.

Weaknesses-

   She puts others well beings above her own (mostly Tsukiko's).

The Gypsies-

Their is a group of gypsies that roam the land of Naruto. Every gypsy has to be a girl and she must know/ learn how to protect herself. This is where Tsukiko and Yoshino learned how to fight, also no matter how young or old you are you have to know how to care for yourself. The life of a gypsy is a hard one. You are hated by most because everyone thinks that gypsies lie and cheat, most do but that's not the point. While Tsukiko loves the life of a gypsy, being free to roam the world, Yoshino hates having Tsukiko growing up without making any friends. 

The cursed sword

Shi no Tenshi- The angel of death

It can only be drawn by people with a lot chakra. Legends say it can give you unimaginable strength, but once you use it once the sword eats your soul, killing you. It's said that the person who made it had chakra stronger then a tailed beast and that person was the only one who could use the sword without dieing. Because the sword is only loyal to the person who made it, and her reincarnation... Tsukiko * cue dramatic music*. The chakra of the person who made Shi no Tenshi is powerful yet full of blood lust and darkness.