Stories

When you see your love

People say the world gets color with love. What if it literally did. Idea off tumbler :p
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All through life all my friends have seen color, met their soul mate. I haven't yet but I long for it.
I bump into a guy. Not all at once but suddenly my world changed. "I can see color!" He grabs me and kisses me. I was shocked by the action but soon I relaxed letting our lips dance. "I think love you" I say. He smilies a goofy smile. This almost seems to good to be true. we talk for hours. I'm nervous around home he makes me have butterflies in my stomach. When we walk out of the bar ,slightly drunk,  I can see he's slightly annoyed but I ignore it as we walk across the street. I suddenly become alert as I hear a loud painful honk then nothing. I see nothing, I feel nothing, and I hear nothing . I'm dressed in all white. I see him laying there he has misty eyes filled with regret, pain, sorrow. As I go to tell him it's alright don't feel bad I'm here people walk through me. I'm-I'm a ghost. I look over to see my body it's in a black body bag. It's over I didn't get to love him or have the life I wanted.
Author P.O.V.
As he wakes up and finds out that she's dead something clicks. She watches him and he find another girl. She's hurt but happy for him. His life goes by ignoring that she even existed. He didn't even go to her funeral or shed one tear. She can't watch any more, She yells at the sky to take her but nothing happens. She just wants to touch him one last timeout even for a second. As she wishes that she watched as he gets mugged and killed. She runs over to him and cries wishing time would stop and also wishing she cold bring him back to life he didn't deserve this. He looks at her and says words that brake her heart into two. "After you were killed I was relived. I-I" his voice cracks. "I can't love you the way u want me to. Because I hurt ever one close to. Why did you wait for me you hardly even know me?" She stands for a moment and then says "I thought love waits and I thought we had a connection" she just stands there because she didn't have time to do anything before he starts glowing then suddenly he's gone and she's alone to face the rest or time alone. He didn't want to go but he did he went.
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I edited it cuz I suck @ writing. And now I don't now how to end it :/Was that a better chapter? Tell me cuz I need to know plz.