Soul Chaser: Broken (on hold)

Storyline

woooh! i'm tired! anyway i want to here what you guys think of this book okay? whether to continue, or not. 

"If you wish really hard, your wish can come true." 

Yukari Maiko and Syaoran Tatana were friends for what seemed like ever. They were always together, the closest of friends since they met each other whilst still in kindergarten. They'd play 'Catch the Haze" and "leap Togga." while being surrounded by pixies. they'd play with there powers and mess with the elements. It was a wonderful time then and now and they could have stayed close forever, but forever only lasted 10 years..

Now at the age of 18, Syaoran can start training and preparing for the Vaditum, the initiation test of WillowCrest Academy. He'd dreamt about this day when he'd be old enough to participate and he'd remind Yukari many times to her irritation. If he passed this, then he would be able to go on to CrescentWing Uni, his ultimate goal and dream. If he got in to CrescentWing, he could get in to anywhere. 

He passed all his initiation tests, but things went wrong in the very last one. During the last of the tests, he lost a speciel treasure given to him by Yukari. He attepted to recover it but he failed to as well failed the test. Once you fail, its hard to get in and try again. 

He was overcome by dissapointment, desperation and anger over his failure and he took it all out on Yukari. He knew she wasn't all to blame but his mouth and mind moved on their own. If that wasn't enough, he even wished that he'd never met her, that she never existed. He hoped that if she never existed, that compass would never have been broken and he would have passed. These very few words, fueled by the anger and desperation raging in him, became a spell, a wish and it came true. 

"Becareful about what you wish for."

Yukari vanished, and no one remembers her as if she never existed, not even her own parents. Only Syaoran can see and sense her now and it just makes him feel even more guilty for what he had carelessly done.

Now he will do anything, even if it means travelling to the world of the dead to retrieve her body and soul. He'll face any amount of dangers that threaten to erase his existence, all to get Yukari back. And he will stop at nothing to get what he want. 

But, will he succeed? will he be able to get her back? 

what has her disappearance effected in his life? 

What will happen to the sweet, loyal relationship they once had?

"You don't know the worth of water, till the well is dry."

i hope you like this book and PLEASE comment! i'd really like to here what you think of it and if i should  continue.