So I'm wondering if this story isn't as powerful as I hoped it would be. Should I continue writing about Sailum's adventure to look for Smokey,or should I stop it and work on Deathly until later? Help please

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Shewolf -Sailums' P.O.V-
ФэнтезиSailum, Smokey's sister still believes Smokey is alive. Jolt, their brother is moving on to be the Alpha. He will surely destroy all wolves if he is Alpha. Sailum is becoming omega. Will they find Smokey before this event? Will her parents and her...
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So I'm wondering if this story isn't as powerful as I hoped it would be. Should I continue writing about Sailum's adventure to look for Smokey,or should I stop it and work on Deathly until later? Help please