You
You're all I want
You're all I need
"us" is all I ever want to be
The way you make me feel
Simply reading your words
The way you life me up
With just a single murmur
Oh how I am falling for you
But is it to soon
Am I spiralling out of control
Will it all end up out the window
As I stand here waiting day and day
Wishing for just a word from you
You make me happy
Your words at times make my day
You're always on my mind
As if you couldn't already see
I love you like an imbecile
Yet you make me feel like everything
You are the world to me
I don't ever want to see you go
I feel like
I would be losing a piece of myself
You are the beat to my heart
The one that keeps me ticking
I love you like crazy girl
Yet I feel like something is missing
Its you
You not being by me
Not hearing your voice
Or ever seeing you drives me crazy
I've fallen harder than ever before
Yet I've barely even seen you
I feel closer to you though
Closer than anyone else before you
What is it that causes that
Is it love
Or just infatuation
It doesn't feel like a petty crush anymore
No its more
More than I could of ever imagined
I'm crazy for you girl
There is no denying it
Im lost in my own little world
Always was always will
Then you showed up along
Somedays the thought of you keeps me dragging on
Its you just you
The one that keeps me thinking
Keeps my heart racing
Yet keeps me calm
Its all you
I like you more than any random mary lou
Your the one I want and always will
Always you just you
so....umm....I spent maybe a week and a half on this poem...because I wanted it to be perfect, I wanted it to be the best yet for specific reasons. Obviously I think I am better at writing love poems than poems about other things but....I was in the mood for finishing this after a nice conversation...so I hopped right on and got typing away...I actually didn't plan to put this up for maybe another week of work time on it...simply so I could let all the ideas process and sink in for it...you see...obviously if you can't tell by my writings...I try to pour all my emotions out into them so...obviously I am crazy for this girl...no...I'm in love with this girl and...I just don't want to screw it up...so whenever I put up love poems for now on, I am going to take extra time to make sure she won't get offended by it or anything...because I'm worried that I might screw it up...
BUT...enough about me...this is about the poem...lol...so...comment, vote...do anything...50+ reads with only comments from one person is a bit on the frustrating side...I want some non-biased opinions...not just opinions from friends....or friends from the girl that this is/was written for...so...POST YOUR COMMENTS...lol...I'm watching you all. :)
Also...yes I know this is a bit different than my repetitive song like writing style that I normally use...but...that one didn't fit this poem well...so I used a compeltely new style basically...with little rhyming..and no repetitiveness of same exact lines....a couple words repeat but...that was because if they didn't it was choppy...and it is still choppy at some spots...no...a lot of spots...need to work on the flow a bit...
