Ashfur looked up from the border. "Yellowfang!" He gasped, bowing to the gray she-cat. "No need to bow, youngi'n!" She purred, sitting close to him. A moment later another she-cat came from behind. "Greetings Ashfur, Yellowfang." She growled, glaring at both of them despite the formal greeting.
"Greetings, Bluestar," purred Yellowfang, giving her a pleased look. "You showed." "Why wouldn't I?" Bluestar sniffed, shaking her fur-head-to-tail. Ashfur noticed the tension between the two gray cats. "Ashfur we came to-" started Yellowfang, and was cut off as Bluestar nudged her.
"You promised." She snapped, looking into Yellowfangs sour, yellow eyes. 'Bluestar is a noble leader' thought Ashfur. 'There's no WAY that she can be alright'
"Ashfur, you are getting a second chance at life." Bluestar said, flicking her tail. "There." She snapped at Yellowfang. "Satisfied?" Yellowfang purred. "Of course Bluestar!" Bluestar seemed to relax. "Ashfur, you will become a kit agin- and will reside in BrambleClan-" "BRAMBLEClan?" Spat Ashfur, stalking around the two cats. "Are you crazy?!"
Yellowfang shrugged. "Crazy so, it's still happening." Ashfur stalked up to her. "No. It's. No-" he was cut off at a bright sheen of light, and he was knocked out into a daze of light.
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Ashfur's second try
FanfictionInspired by @Doveclaw's 'Heathertails second chance' Ashfur has been sent back, for his second try at life. Now Ashfur is in BrambleClan, named after the legendary leader, Bramblestar. Follow Ashfur as he try's to win Squirrelflights heart- for a se...