Okay, guys, listen up! I'm planning to enter this book in @Azzelia's fantasy comp! However, I'm not sure if I can, because it needs to be original. I've asked her about it and am awaiting a response, but if she says no, then it looks like I'll have to change this book! I'll upload a second version of it, called THE PROTECTORS, and have to get rid of the wards and troubletwisters and Wardens, and most of all The Evil. But this version will stay! Not getting rid of this! However, I think I might make The Evil be Wardens or 'Protectors' gone bad, called the 'Attackers'. The original person's Gifts or 'Talents' would have been hypnosis and Talent Transfer, so that they could keep the hypnosis going throughout time. What do you think? I mean, obviously it'll mostly be the same, but I'm thinking of changing Zania's name to an actual word, still weird, of course. Any ideas? I like Rhine or Telia. What do you think of the storyline change?
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Eyes of White
Fantasy"It's not just a bad guy. It is literally the worst thing you could imagine. It possesses anything, working its way up the ranks of minds - as in insect, dog, bird, human, everything - unti it takes over the world. And if it possesses you, you will...
