OK guys! This is a book I've been working on by hand for a while now and I decided that I wanted to start to type it somewhere and that was when I made this account. Aside from my poems this is my first book, so lemmie know whatcha' think!! Enjoy!!!
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One Last Thing: I'm just warning you about poor language. So don't say I didn't warn you about cursing. If there is anything else I'll be sure to let you know!(:
~Aly<3
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Did you ever think that the one person that you trusted the most would betray you? Yeah, I know what you're thinking, of course. What kind of question is that?
Well you'll soon understand.
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My story began on my 17th birthday, October 12th. I was walking down the halls with my two best friends, Rachel Tyler and Felicia Stanton.
As always, Rachel was on my left, with her long light brown curly hair framing her nicely tanned face. She was wearing a pale pink halter top that accented her pale green eyes perfectly. (Along with the eye liner and mascara, of course). Her white shorts showed off her long legs. She was average sized at 5' 6", but unlike the other average girls she was pin straight, without any curves, and she was relatively flat. She complains about that all too much.
Felicia was on my right as usual. Her dark curly brown hair matched her wide brown eyes wonderfully. Felicia looked like me in a way, aside from the dark hair, eyes, and tanned skin. Minus those small details and we were twins. We both were about 5' 5", envious curves, and we both had boobs that were to die for, just saying. She was wearing a sky blue tank top with a pair of beige shorts, and flip flops.
I on the other hand stood in the middle with my long straight strawberry blonde hair down to the middle of my back. My dark blue eyes accented by a small amount of mascara and eye liner. I was wearing a purple tank top with a white and purple striped cardigan and my favorite pair of white shorts. I also had my black gladiator sandals on.
We strut our stuff down the main hall of the North Side of our high school, we were the most loved, and hated girls in our class. Rachel was a straight up bitch, no doubt about it. Felicia was a completely loyal sweet heart and to this day I still wonder why she decided to befriend us. I was simply in between. I could be a bitch, or I could be nice. It all depended on you.
Other students moved out of our way or just kept walking, it was Rachel who wanted them to move, not Felicia and I, and most of them knew that she was the one that liked to cause all of the trouble.
"Rach.." Felicia said quietly, trying to get her to stop being such a jerk to the little Freshmen. "Hey kid, that shirt is so out of style." "Did you sleep in that shirt?!" "Where do you get your cloths?! Oh my god! The garbage right?!?" Ugh she was so annoying.
Rachel shot Felicia a glare and I just looked back and fourth between the two of them, rolled my eyes, sighed, and continued to walk forward.
At the end of the hall we stopped at the stairs that were on the South End of the school in front of Cafeteria C. There stood a handsome guy that was 5' 11" with shaggy blonde surfer hair. Liam Archer, my over protective, wonderful, loyal, and kind hearted boyfriend. And I'll add, sexy to that list of good things.
He had a strong jaw, bright sky blue eyes, tanned skin (that made me feel even paler than I was and hate my freckles that he always called cute) ,and perfectly sculpted muscles. He definitely didn't look like a bag of meat.
"Hey there cutie." He said and poked my nose, right where my freckles were. See I told you!!! Ugh, anyways, he wrapped his strong arms around my waist to hug me and then gave me a gentle kiss. "Uhk! PDA!" Rachel yelled from behind Liam, so when he hugged me I shot daggers at her with my eyes before closing them and relaxing against his body.
""Happy Birthday Avery." He whispered into my ear. He was the first one to remember and I smiled. Maybe today wouldn't be so bad.
That thought was ruined when I ran into Jack, Liam's best friend who I hated, bear hugged me from behind. Yeah, he only does that when he has something horrible planned. He's like a big brother to me, well a mean big brother anyway. He had shaggy hair like Liam's but it was brown. Aside from that they looked exactly the same, weird right?
"Happy Birthday, you psycho bitch!" He yelled loud enough for everyone in the hall to hear, and then turn their heads. A few of them laughed but others just went on with what they were doing knowing that it wasn't their business. "Umph!" I said as he planted my feet back on the ground.
He was laughing like crazy and I was just glaring at him. Of course he would be dating Rachel, they were perfect for each other.
"So we're all throwing you a party tonight. The whole school is coming. You have no way out of it girlie." He teased me. He was right, if I tried to not go him and Rachel would practically kill me while trying to get me there. I wans't the type to party, actually I wasn't the type to have all of this fame throughout school. I was really only there as a face for Rachel and that was fine with her at first but now she seems really annoyed by it..
"Fine, but just remember I'm doing this so I don't die!" I said to them which got everyone laughing since they knew what I was thinking about which was what happened when I tried to get out of my party last year, that wasn't pretty.
If only I knew better.. If only we all knew better.
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OK!!!!!!!!! So I really wanna know what you're thinking about this!! It's a little different and I don't know if I should go on. Seriously, any constructive criticism it truly appreciated.!
OH YEAH!
The cover is posted as a picture to the righttt!! If anyone wants to come up with a better one, pleaseeeee do so?!(:
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~Aly<3
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Kiss My Coffin
Mystery / ThrillerYoung Avery Blackwell's life was taken on her 17th birthday. Her death was ruled a suicide, but was it really? Her boyfriend Liam doesn't believe that she killed herself, no matter how unhappy she was. He sticks with her until the end although o...
