This is the first poem i have written, so it'll probably be a little bad and not make any sense. Sorry! Could you please leave a comment and tell me your HONEST opinion about it. Hope you like it.
Ice is smiling at you
Ice is laughing at you
The eyes stare right into yours
As it makes its way up the doors
The entire carpet is covered in white
Soon, its teeth will come and bite
The gnawing at your heart increases
As the world around you falls to pieces
Memories are slowly forgotten
And the heaps of bodies around you become rotten
Pungent smells suffocate your senses
As the ice climbs up and over your fences
Quickly, you shout, it’s getting nearer!
Abruptly, your senses become ever so clearer
Cold and sickness cling to the dead
All of their clothes are stained with red
Everywhere in the room, there is death
Still, the air is as a soft as a baby’s breath
A knife strikes at your leg and you fall
And desperately, you try to crawl
But it’s too late, the ice has got you
It pins you to the ground like super glue
Your eyes slowly start to close
As a numbing icicle forms on your nose
The icicles claw their way into a muscle
Diving deeply into thy skull with a hustle
They sparkle like a sea of stars
Yet, you know they will leave many scars
Thy lips moan and groan
As the ice pierces at your bone
Thy hands, numb and blue
Death, is most certainly going to pass through
The pain will always strike twice
As you lie there and pay the price
Paralyzed, you look up at your gravestone
Now realise, that you are forever alone
Lifeless flowers lay there, all precise
You have now become a statue of ice
You – the sacrifice
Shall now take this advice
Go, lay in your tomb
And start your life again, in a mother’s womb.